Xae_Deus

Its pretty simple. They go from mortal, to level 6 iron, to level 3 phoenix which is equivalent to level 7 mountain, but you need a pill and a jade beauty to dual cultivate the immortal art from a hidden scroll in a rival sect. Then a young master will be arrogant, so slap his face and force him to kowtow while you sever his 378 meridians, crippling his cultivation. Then you sit in a cave to break through to rank 2 sword saint, but a demonic cultivator causes you to suffer a stomache-ache and now you're crippled. Now you have to find a ring with a spirit grandpa in it who was actually the immortal emperor who was sealed for being too ugly. Pretty straightforward.

Hoo buddy, gotta love something new like a Powerpuff Girls fanfic. I must've read hundreds of Naruto, Harry Potter, and Marvel fics each. Not that they sucked, but I needed a breath of fresh air. Blossom speaks a little too formally in my opinion, using elaborate words like tactical and logistical too often. She can say these words, but it shouldn't be every sentence. Just have her be slightly more casual, and I'd have no complaints. All the other characters talk exactly like they should, which is impressive. And yes, the fic uses AI, but it's been edited heavily. I appreciate that the author was forthcoming about it being AI-assisted and coming through with putting in effort to reduce AI-isms, although a few did slip through the cracks. If you don't mind me asking, author, which AI are you using? It's prose is really good, especially in the first couple chapters.

Hah, got a good chuckle out of me.

Great chapter, loved it a lot. Yeah, the sudden POV shift to Brick caught me off guard for a sec, but it wasn't that bad.

I think you meant, "purely to spite his former master".

True. Why make Brick a reincarnator if he's not going to take advantage of that? Other than his mental superiority for having a past life, there really wasn't a need story-wise, and Brick was always the smart one out of the trio anyway.

You two were literally made in the exact same way but with different ingredients though. If he's a vile mutant for the way he was born, then so are you.

Agreed. They could be called criminals for breaking Mojo out, but they haven't hurt anyone other than by fighting back.

He complimented Blossom, not himself. So not narcissistic at all.

So far, great story. The character dialogue is in character, and the prose is immaculate. But there is no reason Blossom should suspect the red one, Brick, is the smart one. But other than that and a few minor spacing issues after periods, I have no complaints. Thanks for the story!