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SORROW1dReplied to dn_walkerCh 40 Chapter 37 : [ CONSTITUTION : QUEEN OF THE NIGHT ( UNIQUE ) ]- SORROW1dReplied to dn_walkerCh 40 Chapter 37 : [ CONSTITUTION : QUEEN OF THE NIGHT ( UNIQUE ) ]
- SORROW2dReplied to dn_walkerCh 40 Chapter 37 : [ CONSTITUTION : QUEEN OF THE NIGHT ( UNIQUE ) ]
- SORROW2dReplied to dn_walkerCh 27 Chapter 25 : The First Mission And The First Daily Quest
- SORROW7dReplied to Keimuru
in my opinion, that's actually worse than bolding them instead of using capital
[ SKILLS : STRENGTH INCREASEMENT, MAGIC INCREASEMENT, MAGIC CONDENSATION, DEATH POSSESION, HIGH-SPEED REGENRATION, HIGH-SPEED MAGIC REGENERATION, REVIVAL( CURRENTLY UNUSABLE) ] - SORROW8dReplied to jclearwo
um, actually it's kinda different. mc stats are the number value in one field, while combat ability is smth like average amount of damage to be dealt. mc only has high stats but no skill, while the king has lower stats but higher skill. do say if you still don't understand, I'll try to go in depth
The attack speed from both sides got faster and faster as they exchanged blows again and again. It soon reached the level where it was impossible to see the person, only leaving the color of white-black light and black-red light dashing around the room at all angles. - SORROW9dReplied to Maan_Saraswat
my aim was never to write a good one and make it into an adaptation, i was just using it as a platform to improve my writing skills. After all opinion from other's are the best compared to the one u make urself. Anyways, thx for the review. At least I got to know that I still need to improve in writing
- SORROW11dReplied to Karma_shi
also the fact about loudness is quite correct, cuz the system was supposed to speak loudly in the head of Wang Qian
[ SKILLS : STRENGTH INCREASEMENT, MAGIC INCREASEMENT, MAGIC CONDENSATION, DEATH POSSESION, HIGH-SPEED REGENRATION, HIGH-SPEED MAGIC REGENERATION, REVIVAL( CURRENTLY UNUSABLE) ] - SORROW11dReplied to jclearwo
well, the system's storage only works on things that originates from the system or other stuff that'll be later on revealed.
[ SYSTEM STORAGE : MAGIC SWORD OF HATRED ] - SORROW11dReplied to
well, someone else also said something similar , and I tried changing it. but the results weren't very satisfactory. I'll continue find another method, but for now, it's stuck with capitals
[ SKILLS : STRENGTH INCREASEMENT, MAGIC INCREASEMENT, MAGIC CONDENSATION, DEATH POSSESION, HIGH-SPEED REGENRATION, HIGH-SPEED MAGIC REGENERATION, REVIVAL( CURRENTLY UNUSABLE) ] - SORROW13dReplied to Xerotia
I also planned to use increment, but then again, the word sounds weird. I'll consider more about it as 'increasment' ain't a word apparently
[ SKILLS : STRENGTH INCREASEMENT, MAGIC INCREASEMENT, MAGIC CONDENSATION, DEATH POSSESION, HIGH-SPEED REGENERATION, HIGH-SPEED MAGIC REGENERATION, REVIVAL( CURRENTLY UNUSABLE), MAGIC PRESSURE ] - SORROW20dReplied to Jordan_alucardCh 53 Chapter 50 : Learning To Cook In Magical Ways ( part 1 )
- SORROW23dReplied to SC0RD
I see, I'll try to change that if I ever right a similar one
"Oh, you're talking about that. It's okay, you can call me what you want. I know I'm not worthy to be your father, but I'll be it anyways, cause I still have to take care of you and fulfill my promise with the village head" he replied. - SORROW23dReplied to SC0RD
sry bout that, I've couldn't find words to use so I could only repeat the same words.
But what he didn't know was, even if the plot wasn't here anymore, he still wouldn't be able to live the life he wanted. At least, not now. - SORROW23dReplied to SC0RD
nope,wrote it myself
"Replying to my lord, this lowly one is called Jian Ze ( holding on to responsibility I guess that's what you get after translating into English )" the old man replied. - SORROW23dReplied to SC0RDCh 15 Chapter 13 : The First Contact
- SORROW23dReplied to salvatore68Ch 3 Chapter 1 : I've Reincarnated!! （ part 2 )
- SORROW24dReplied to Azathoth2Ch 5 Chapter 3 : You Never Try, You Never know.