The story took a whole 180 turn. I don’t hate it but..

You forgot the P in Sed’s

Relatable

I think that this story has a lot to work on. I quite enjoyed it, but where the problem lays is with the character development and the overall goals and meaning. Those were my only cons. I like how the characters are all different and unique. Don’t get me wrong, I still get more flavor from a Popeyes biscuit than them, but I do like how the author is setting up. I also find the MIC ark very compelling. I want to know what these guys are doing with these crystals. I also want to know more about Sammy’s past life and his powers. Great story

Cool story bro.I found it very funny and you should continue it