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    Index_754825 days ago
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    The pacing is quite comfortable, it's not fast but not that slow either, though i might be biased since i prefer slow pacing. the characters are ok, they are not the most interesting thing but they aren't bland, and the characters aren't brain dead, there are some weird things they do, but nothing that offensive that makes you question the intelligence of the author. (on a not so short note, most of the "mental retardation" of characters can be explained by a simple logic explanation, but it feels like, we as readers are filing in the blanks on holes and things the author never thought of to begin with. so some problems fall into the category of whether or not we think some decisions or the lack of one makes sense in the context presented) I didn't find any problem with the grammar, (though that may be because I don't know grammar myself.) in conclusion, it's a novel with good potential that would be on my library for some time. by the way... is this novel translated?, the update rate is quite suspicious. the author could just be hoarding chapters but that's not a very convincing argument since said "hoardering" is quite extreme.