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What a shame, i thought his power would be like Intuitive Aptitude from the Heroes series. Of course, it's still amazing anyway. I've always liked powers that can copy the powers of others. ■ Intuitive Aptitude: ● PASSIVE! ● Positive effects; • Allows the understanding of mechanical and biological systems. • Allows the user to understand/comprehend the structure and functioning of complex systems instinctively. • Allows the user to instinctively understand/comprehend the essence of how all things work and how to fix them if they are broken. • Allows the user, with an extensive understanding and experience of power, to understand the complexities of cause and effect(butterfly effect), allowing the user to control the course of the future. • Allows the user to understand/know the abilities of others and the essence behind them through a short/long visual observation. • Allows the user to study those who have skills, analyze and copy them, adding them to their own. The skills copied by the user would guarantee a huge boost in control, allowing the user to control the skills much more easily and quickly than the original user of the skill could. • Allows the user to detect some medical/biological conditions of the target, discovering diseases such as aneurysm and brain tumor. • Allows the user to make adjustments to the copied skills, removing some defects, limitations, ensuring greater potential, power, versatility and ensuring less energy use when using the skills. As an example, you can copy telepathy and maybe derive telekinesis from it. ● Negative effects/side effects/limits; • The ability generates a 'hunger/obsession' that is difficult to control, thus generating a relentless desire to open the skulls of empowered targets and understand their powers through their brains. Thus making the user of the ability a serial killer if they cannot control themselves. • Systems that the user has never seen before require extensive study, however, the user would still understand much faster than any super genius could understand and with much less technological equipment. • It is not known whether it would work on other types of systems, such as electronic hardware or computer software, however, it is possible to analyze/comprehend/understand the 'system' behind human behavior. • It is not necessary to kill someone to copy the ability, however, a physical study of the victim's brain is necessary, which requires direct observation, requiring the removal of the upper part of the skull, so that the victim soon dies from blood loss and trauma. Victims with rapid cell regeneration, however, can survive this by repairing the damage. • It is possible to 'empathically' copy skills without hurting the source, a highlight is that the skill copied in this way would come with less control, however, to copy in this way it is necessary to connect empathically with the target and help them deal with the problems traumatic personal emotions they have. ■ NOTE: I always found it strange that in the Heroes series, no one who possessed this power thought of copying some super penetrating vision type ability or creating some 'technological glasses' that had the ability to 'see' directly into the target's brain without the need to open people's skulls. After all, the hunger/obsession that this power causes is due to the need for greater knowledge, which in this case would be the powers and not due to the need to observe other people's brains.

I can't tell if he's brave or very arrogant, maybe both. Because Wakanda is not weak at all, if he believes they are weak just because they use cold weapons made from vibranium, then he will suffer greatly at their hands. Not to mention that although this world is based on the MCU, however, there are many other elements, you never know if a panther goddess will come out of a portal the moment he attacks Wakanda and they realized that he is 'too strong' for them to handle. There is an omnipotent city full of gods in the universe, there are egyptian gods hidden on the planet, so i am not surprised if the panther goddess is hidden in some small dimension in wakanda.

It seems a little ridiculous to me so far. I don't think he would give up on gaining power through the cosmic storm, especially since he can use the portal to go there, be irradiated with the storm and let the Doombot take him back if he ends up passing out after being hit. Of course, there are some problems, such as keeping the portal active after being hit by the cosmic storm, the possibility of losing human appearance and what excuse to use for not answering NASA's call when they call to say that the space station has been hit by the cosmic storm. However, he always knew that this trip to space would happen, so i expected him to create some spell/technology that would help him solve these problems and allow him to gain power safely and calmly. I believe there must be some spells on Kamar-Taj that allow him to guide and/or control the magnitude of genetic changes after being irradiated by the cosmic storm. Even if it doesn't exist, i believe he could have thought about creating it from the moment he transmigrated. In fact, i don't know why, but i started reading this book today and i already imagined a new book with a protagonist with three character models; ■Dr. Doom(MARVEL) ■Jayce(LEAGUE OF LEGENDS) ■Viktor(LEAGUE OF LEGENDS)

A system with its own consciousness and which has a hobby of showing how proud it is with every word it speaks in its host's head. How terrifying. If i'm not mistaken, he's still in the hospital or walking down the street and he still used the Super Soldier Serum without thinking twice or asking what would happen when he used it. Anyone who knows MARVEL well or has just watched the Captain America film knows the change the Captain had when he used the serum and not to mention the pain he had to go through. Only those who have no knowledge whatsoever about the Captain's transformation process would directly use the serum without thinking twice, mainly because they know nothing about it, therefore, they are naturally unaware of the consequences. The most intriguing thing about all this is why the retard would buy all 500 MP worth of potions just because 'his life is more important'. He hasn't even figured out yet whether the world is the comic book version or the movie version. Especially because he lived 25 years in this world without any occurrence of which he ended up in the middle of a fight between heroes and villains. Soon after transmigrating, he was already scared for his own life, i believe it would be much more valid if the author made him buy all 500 MP in potions just because he was still in shock with his recent death in his previous world and the accident that this current body has suffered.

What is the original name of this work?

I don't think that's what he meant. I also found the way he acts very strange when he has actually lived for 210 years, not to mention that he doesn't seem to have any of Naruto's personality in him. Even if he is Naruto with the personality we know, living for 210 years would give him a very mature view of everything in himself, he had countless life experiences, he had children, a wife, countless friends and is a savior of the entire world. Therefore, i believe that he would have no difficulty in dealing with relationships like he has had so far. His world already had 'advanced technology' when he became an adult, the fact that he was so overly impressed about technology is also a little strange. His hobbies, such as cosplay, are also very meaningless for someone like him who has lived for so long and has experienced a lot of life's difficulties. Not to mention that all it takes is one technique to change his appearance, his clothes too, he's basically a walking cosplay machine. His thought process is also very childish for someone who has lived 210 years. Anyway, that's just what I found so far after reading this far and I'm not criticizing it. It's just like RadTaz said, to me it looks like a diary of an AU Peter Parker who has very few memories of a Naruto that don't affect him in basically anything. Of course, aside from the fact that he doesn't seem as genius as the original Peter, he's not widely recognized as a nerd, and he's not as science/technology focused as the original Peter was. He also doesn't get bullied like the original and is much more sociable.

I hope you don't mind too much if my comments offend you in any way, criticize your story, give an opinion on the development of the story you created or something related. I always end up getting really excited when commenting, mainly because i have this annoying habit of putting myself in the protagonist's shoes to try to imagine what my reaction would be compared to that of the protagonist. Therefore, i end up commenting a little rudely from time to time, but i can say with certainty that all my comments, even those that are a little 'aggressive' in a certain way, were made without any intention of criticizing you, without any intention of offending you or trying to regulate the development of your book at any time. I've even had some authors respond to my comments in various aggressive ways. ■ An example of reposting; ▪︎If you know so much, why don't you make your own book and stop meddling with mine? Anyway, i really liked your story so far, keep up the good work and I hope you don't mind if my comments are a little 'rude' and 'suggestive.'

And the new chapters?

I believe that creating a new spell, preferably passive, that would serve as a magical grimoire, would be viable and safer in terms of the privacy of your spells. Especially because his spells, his principles and the magic circles present in them are basically in the protagonist's 'sea of ​​consciousness'. ■📒SPIRITUAL GRIMOIRE(?)📒■ □ TYPE ▪︎ Assistant. □ ATTRIBUTE ▪︎ Neutral or spiritual. □USE ▪︎ Passive. □LEVEL ▪︎ 1(0/100). ■ EFFECT; ▪︎ Generates a spiritual grimoire that is visible only to the user and to those the user gives permission to. ▪︎ The grimoire has its own spiritual pen with 'infinite' ink, it can take shape as a normal pen, a pencil or even a 'quill pen' straight from the world of Harry Potter. ▪︎ Allows the user to project magical circles into the grimoire that correspond to spells that already exist in their sea of ​​consciousness. ▪︎ Allows the user to simulate different magic circles based on their existing spells or new spells they are thinking about creating, whether to actually create new spells and/or make changes to existing spells without having to spend their magic particles in abundance on the direct process in your sea of ​​consciousness. Simulate a very large number of times beforehand, however, the expenditure of magic in the simulation process is almost insignificant compared to the expenditure that is used in errors in your sea of ​​consciousness. ▪︎ The grimoire generates a panel of user properties, as well as the 'system' that the protagonist possesses, the panel/status is related entirely to the spiritual/magical prowess, spells possessed by the protagonist and magical characteristics of the host. However, if the user creates passive/active spells related to biological assessment/classification/scanning of sentient beings, it is indeed possible for the 'status' to also classify physical characteristics in real time. ▪︎ With the amount of simulations, new spells projected into the spellbook, even the simple daily use of the spellbook, the level of the spells would increase, thus generating new effects over time. The grimoire can act as a simple diary. ▪︎ Therefore, it may be possible that the grimoire, with the increase in level, adds effects such as reducing magical energy when using spells, canceling the need to chant to use spells, improving control of magical energy, amplification of spell power, biological alarm clock, magic calculator, parallel thinking, thought acceleration, temporary computational amplification, magical brain computing, optical brain grimoire, even something as strange and illusory as the grimoire and the mind as one. ■ Anyway, there are countless possibilities. If I'm not mistaken, i remember in a manwha that the protagonist, who is a wizard, replicated his brain with magic and transformed it into a type of artificial intelligence/magical digital life that had its own consciousness. In addition to being completely loyal, the digital life also turned his house into some kind of technomagic fortress with all kinds of features both technological and magical. The protagonist could even replicate his own brain and turn it into a grimoire that resided in his sea of ​​consciousness that would serve as a second brain for himself.

■ I T A C H I U C H I H A: ▪︎ Super genius level intelligence, master of manipulation, master of deception, master of espionage, master of infiltration, kenjutsu, taijutsu, bukijutsu, shurikkenjutsu, chakra, ninjutsu, genjutsu, summoning jutsu, superhuman physical characteristics, nature transformation(yin, yang, water, fire, wind), sharingan, mangekyo sharingan, superhuman reflexes, precognition of enemy actions, copying jutsus, copying physical movements, izanami, izanagi, tsukuyomi, amaterasu, susanoo, totsuka blade, yata mirror and others. ■ Y A M A M O T O G E N R Y U S A I: ▪︎ Master swordsman, master in hand-to-hand combat, master in shunpo, master strategic, master tactician, master in hakuda, high pain tolerance, high longevity, strategic patience, swordsmanship, spiritual physiology/god of death physiology, reaitsu/immense spiritual power, master in reiatsu control, master in kido, super human physical characteristics(strength, defense, agility, speed, etc), ryūjin jakka, shikai, bankai, bankai special, zanpakutou, pyrokinesis and others. ■ SHIKI TOHNO: ▪︎ Magecraft(gravity manipulation, only on Ciel's route), mystical eyes of death perception, nanatsu-yoru, olympian-level physique, assassination arts (forgotten, only rarely used by instincts), formidable tactical master and vampirism (Ciel's route) and others.

I won't deny that Xavier can feel Fubuki's psychic/psionic power that was amplified by cosmic energy, but i can't turn a blind eye to the fact that he called her a mutant. Fubuki is not even a human from this world, therefore, she does not have any X-Gene, which makes the possibility of her being a mutant null. If i'm not mistaken, Xavier's power also allowed him to know at a glance who is a mutant or not, implying that the author may have made it so that Xavier's power in this story does not possess this ability, all so that it would be an occasion is created that forces a connection between the protagonist and the mutants. I believe that the protagonist will clash with the X-Men when they come, beat up Cyclops, beat up Wolverine, mistreat Xavier's mind with passive mental feedback when the professor tries to get into his mind and flirt with Jean Gray and Storm. Of course, we can't forget that the Brotherhood will also probably sense Fubuki's psychic/psionic power as well and the confusion will be greater. Note the fact that the protagonist could make her invisible after she felt Xavier's mental power and avoid the meeting between them. It's possible that Xavier also knows that she's not a mutant, but seeing the size of her power, he wants her to join his academy too, after all, the old man is a manipulator in most fanfics and i can't see him any other way.

I hate books with gacha in the middle that change the personality and character of the protagonist with the assimilation of other characters. Even if these changes are very small, they still exist at the end of the day. A mixture of many beings in one, it is like a sewing monster. Not to mention the life experiences of those who were assimilated which are not really the protagonist's own experiences. I believe that the author could have given him a character card that would help him have extreme willpower, that would help him negate all or almost all of the side effects of any further assimilation and that card could also not affect him in any way. in any way. It would also be nice if the first card wasn't from someone as strong as Omni-Man, because it's very easy to distance yourself from your inner humanity with such power, even knowing that there are beings in the world you live in that could erase you from existence with a single thought, no matter how strong the protagonist is. It is the famous thought of certain protagonists created by certain authors; Only the family matters, everything else can crumble and disappear into fly ash that I will only watch. ■ As an example, it would be the card of some entity without its own consciousness, but which has a condition/power/characteristic/talent; ▪︎ Mental singularity. ▪︎ Infinite willpower. ▪︎ Absolute psychic defense.

I forgot to mention how ironic it is, the fact that the protagonist thought he would lose his balls for assimilating the women's card when he should have had the answer to that from the moment he got the gacha. He drank the liquid, instantly 'knew everything' about the gacha essence itself, but he was still surprised by many things about the gacha itself. ■ Example; ▪︎ He didn't know that 50% of assimilation were physical characteristics and the other 50% were mental characteristics. ▪︎ He didn't know he would have 'dreams' of/about/like the people he chose to assimilate. ▪︎ And some others.

Did this author die or something?

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When i saw him having these nightmares, i already imagined that he would create a team of heroes or even a very unique non-profit organization dedicated to helping heroes/vigilantes in their heroic acts, and this organization, whether secret or public, would cover the whole world, it would be more like a virtual club, there would not be an absolute leader, there would be a group of people forming a totally united council, any and all suggestions made by anyone who is part of it of the club would be taken into consideration. Every hero/antihero would be the equivalent of a guest/consultant/employee of a company. They would be assigned a level/class based on their powers, skills, unique abilities and possible other characteristics. The heroes, located in different cities or even in different countries, could ask for help from other members of the 'club', whether they are near or far, if they need it and would also receive help from an advanced super AI codenamed Watch. The AI ​​itself was essentially created to manage/help and among other things all members of the club as a whole. They could receive assistance in moving, such as technology similar to the Justice League's boomtube. Members could receive help in training/controlling their powers, they could receive help in creating unique uniforms for each one and many other possible things. They could receive help to hide their identities, through physical/magical/other means and thus keep each of their relatives safe. Members could even receive financial help in the form of a salary if possible and that would be good because many of them have problems with this. The organization could be in charge of damage control if the protagonist creates something to help with this problem or even creates the microbots from the movie Big Hero 6. The name of this organization/club could be Overwatch, i really like the premise of this organization in the game in itself, although i never played the game due to lack of interest. Thus, an example would be Captain America, who could be the leader of the Avengers and still be a member of the Overwatch club/organization. Another example would be SHIELD from an old MARVEL game and i think it was one of the three Marvel Ultimate Alliance games. Where you chose your character, whether they were from the X-Men, the Brotherhoods, the Avengers, the Fantastic Four, lone heroes, anti-heroes or others. Players always entered a SHIELD tower, there you could get missions, upgrade characters and many other things. There were always a lot of people there, with several characters from different groups, the premise of the organization would be the SHIELD of this game.

I was expecting a more exotic and intriguing name. ● Example: Ethan, Toretto, Elijah, Zeref, Arcan, Bruce, Harry, Orion, Perseus, Perseu, Seiya, Shiryu, Draco, Drakon, Sirius, Navi, Celius, Dylan, Evren, Aslan, Dantalion, Arceus, Palkia, Dialga, Giratina and Ditto. The last five are all Pokemon. ■NOTE: The meaning of certain names; ▪︎ Orion; border, limit, light of the heavens and/or light of paradise. ▪︎ Perseus or Perseus; son of fire and/or son of light. ▪︎ Draco or Drakon; dragon and/or serpent. ▪︎ Sirius; burning and/or scorching. ▪︎ Navi; prophet. ▪︎ Célio; that comes from the sky. ▪︎ Dylan; big tide, big current and/or big flow. ▪︎Evren; cosmos and/or universe.

I found it particularly strange that he openly uses magic in front of customers without putting a spell on them so that they don't focus too much on it and don't say that he uses magic for others. After all, when he arrived in the world, he alarmed SHIELD and he himself saw many soldiers/agents there. Not to mention that it was almost impossible for wizards to make the decision to use magic openly in the presence of 'muggles' in their original world, he probably should have been mentally conditioned not to use it either. The least he could do is wonder if they would come after him if they discovered that a 'wizard' was doing 'magic' in New York. And i also found it very stupid that the author turned him into a layman for anything 'muggle', taking into account who he is and even ignored the issue of his documents, although this can be easily resolved with magic, i believe. I always hoped to read a book in which an author put a character's answer to certain questions in the most direct and short way possible. ■ The author put it; "What are you?" Domino asked, pointing her gun. "A wizard. We'll talk later." Harry replied. ■ What I expected it to be; "What are you?" Domino asked, pointing her gun." "That doesn't seem to be any of your business." Harry replied.

Wasn't it just making him an orphan in the first place? A character like this having a family is basically irrelevant, unless you just want to make him have a little 'humanity' and 'love' related to the relatives themselves. However, this is his second life, i think he already had relatives in his first life, taking into account that in his first life he was not born as mentally disturbed/crazy/psychopathic as he is today, so he probably had good emotions towards his family and therefore having a mother in the second life has become irrelevant. At least you could make him fake his own death.