

i suddenly gain inspiration
Writing
of reading
35
Read books
what am i reading bro theres no way a real adult would say ding dong
hello, what did u like about my story specifically?
something, something inside of me, just snapped
I didnt touch myself to that line (I did)
wait so this guy could handle looking at dead corpses and killing goblins but couldnt believe he was seeing an actual skeleton?
this is the kind of power fantasy i like where the mc actually goes through some hardship in the beginning so that when he becomes op it’s more satisfying and believable
I think you could change “increased” to “strengthened”
where are the end quotes
This was confusing