MorTa7074

I actually like these events. You don't make the character perfect, and that's a good thing, but waiting for chapters makes me lose interest in the story. If it's because you want to keep it good quality, then keep doing what you're doing.

You must end your wretched life.

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Simply a wonderful story [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

You're a good writer, the story is great but it's very slow.

It's true that Goku is weak, but he was learning. I'm sure if you knew Goku's personality, you would have made him learn magic out of vanity, to become the strongest wizard. What I mean is that Goku is improving in combat, but you make his personality rigid; he doesn't try to improve himself.

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I will start reading the story. I gave it five stars because of the rating No harem [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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