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Wouldn't his overdrive make this fight at least fair? Like, as long as I remember, Kevin gets twice as strong for a limited time and then a drawback later.
Ey, don't complain. You were doing this aswell for a long while.
Man, Smallsnake prob be like: "Ah, yes, he went through all of that... for this guy. All acording to plan, sasuga Ren-sama!"
Wouldn't it made more sense to Ren say something like "Remember how I can see a potential future? Crazy right?" though? Why not just say that, Kevin already """knows""" about it :/
Better then the slow painful grind systems... I'd take a quest system if it wasn't that specific "Torture your social image" quests, after all, quests are both "fun" and they lead you (even though kind of forced) to a good place/relationships.
Gonna be honest with what I expect from a first time novel, so yeah don't mind my review. As english is not my first language, I'm writing in my main language and then translating it and then editing what I think it doesn't click right. So I will say 3 stars for writing quality. The story in my head is prety much advanced and will constantly change so, I can't really say much. 4 stars As for the characters, well I have afantasia (idk if thats the word in english) so I don't visualize shit, but I tried my best to cover the characters with actions and personality. 3 stars. Update stability theres none so 0 stars. In general, I think my novel is mainly story wise. And even so this genre of people getting reincarned or transmigrated into a dating sim is kinda becoming more and more cliché so touché!
imagine the reaction of the player (supposing there is one in this AU of the game) when they see this: 'Oh yeah, the couple and that attendant are for sure the major villains of this game for sure!'
Bro speedruned the stone age school LOL