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BrokenandBored12312dCommentedYou are getting more cringe every chapter. Please stop.
"Alright, thank you very much Takumi sa~~n!" She yawned at the last part making me chuckle and leave the room wearing my clothes and adjusting my belt to hide my humongous dragon.- BrokenandBored12322dReplied to SSDreadnought
No, no I haven’t.
The Biker navigated the surrounding area on his phone. The water droplets had started falling on his phone screen as well. After a few seconds, the biker selected a place on the map and said "Although this is a few minutes from the main road, it is the nearest town I can see here. Traveling for long in this rain would be idiotic...I rather stay for the night and start my journey tomorrow." - BrokenandBored12323dPosted
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Loud but quiet, really?
Junior can feel the tears on his neck and the loud but soft and quiet voice in his ear. If she was a slightly louder talker his ear would be ringing. - BrokenandBored12323dCommented
A woman, not a women
"Well let me tell you!" Junior shouts. "I was walking to get my fuckin hair cut. That's all fine and dandy. But not 5 gods damned blocks away from this place I hear a women scream for help! And not a single one of my men were in sight! Now I'm not expecting everyone to be vigilantes or some juiced up superhero or huntsman that goes to save a damsel in distress. But there is a reason I put patrols around my territory. So that a women won't get mugged and possibly raped by 5 bald fuckers. So I guess it's time I revamp and revise that whole fucking plan" Junior doesn't just face one direction and stand still. He walked around the dance floor and it was clear he was pissed and livid. - BrokenandBored12323dCommented
Instead of end late, I think you mean inflate
"Yes, but you've practically already been taking over these last few months anyway. The men all already see you as their boss. Especially after you increased the Xiong family name by having them patrol the not so safe parts of Vale. Our reputation hasn't been this 'good' in a long time. And the other side of that coin, your ways of making Lien has also been revolutionary for the family. And we still haven't even opened up the club yet" Derek praises Junior, something he holds back on doing to not end late the ego of Junior in fear that he will go back to his old ways. - BrokenandBored12324dPosted
I quit as soon as I saw the mc bitch about getting “only” five wishes. There is not one world in all of fiction that I cannot make my bitch with five wishes.
This book has been deleted. - BrokenandBored12324dCommented
Depends on what “extra” the god gives you
2) Bleach - BrokenandBored12324dCommented
Holy mother of cringe
???: "Very astute young one. I'm am know by many names, and those who have heard of me fear my ire." - BrokenandBored12324dPosted
The grammar is so bad it causes me physical pain. The wishes are just straight up bullshit. If you make it so anyone with half a brain cell can just no diff the entire universe by the end of the first week, then there is no story. No struggle or challenge. And then to have all that power and still be so fucking stupid with it just makes me want to kill something. The dialogue is also super cringe. I’m out
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Really dark darkness huh, Jesus Christ
'It's so dark where am i' I thought to my self, I was in this really dark void darkness as far as the eye could see. - BrokenandBored12325dReplied to God_Of_Null
He was inside the “hut” that was three bedrooms a kitchen and living room. All made of wood, which doesn’t drop.He could have dug straight down and replaced the floor above him.
Knowing that no agreement could be reached with people like the Dothraki and that my life could be in danger if I didn't prepare myself to face those people, I decided to open the menu and put on a full suit of netherite armor. - BrokenandBored12326dCommented
Slowly sipping. You can’t slowly gulp down a drink. Jesus
In a club, in the less pleasant side of Gotham, a brown haired youth in his late teens sat at the bar, slowly gulping down a drink. - BrokenandBored12327dCommented
Just kill him, erasing everything that makes him a person is arguably worse
It was either this or kill him…which was something he wanted to avoid. 'You can't transfer memories when there are no memories in there. He's already lived his life, it's not like he's going to be having dinner with someone in this state.' He thought as he heard the frail man groan lightly. - BrokenandBored12327dPosted
I’ve been binging your work all night, just like your Naruto fic, at the beginning it sounded like the 4000 other RWBY fics. Overdone bs. But it was really well done. The grammar was excellent and the plot was interesting without being forced. My only complaint was the mc was a little too emo for my taste. But I was sad to see the story dropped and replaced with a Schnee fic. Will read that next though. Good job and good luck.
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If you do per minute for health, do the same for chakra
Cp - 5000 [54 per 30 seconds] - BrokenandBored12327dReplied to MBS_41
Boruto can burn in hell. It doesn’t count
He pushed himself up to his knees as he looked down at his own body, noticing the fair tone of his skin. His attention was pulled by the strings of hair that fell in front of his eyes. 'Red?'