I really liked this. I kinda wish you wouldn't use AI to help you write so I could give the story a proper review but its cool. The story is entertaining, some of the descriptions are a bit repetitive or too much but still good. The characters are entertaining and the storys shift from a lighthearted tone to dark was unexpected which worries me about how others would react but I feel you've made the right choice. Overall good story. Keep it up👍