Kirito_Firmiano

This is a great fanfic. I have some ideas for the future of the story: you should make the MC learn Orochimaru’s sealing technique to separate Naruto’s two parts and give the MC a body of his own. He should mark someone from the Hyuga clan (the one Haku and Hidan kidnapped when Orochimaru attacked Konoha) and awaken the Tenseigan (without that Rinnegan nonsense). I read in a fanfic that the body always has to adapt to the soul (make the new body adapt to the MC’s soul with Uzumaki characteristics and keep the Byakugan as a benefit of the new body). He could also devour the soul of the former host and learn their techniques (like the Gentle Fist). And for the MC to gain more system points, he just needs to maintain a link between them (like twins), so the MC always knows how Naruto is doing and can appear whenever needed. To make this movement easier, give the MC a teleportation ability.

How I think the story should go. Naruto doesn't have to change his personality much, he continues as you wrote he cares about those who care about him, but he shouldn't forgive those who did him bad so easily, and he should stop weighing that 3 hokage cares about him, (for we all know that this man sucks). In question the uchiha lineage I think he should not have, because he will get very OP, how to improve (naruto must accept himself as he is, and know that humans are evil by nature and that not everyone deserves "love," and in this his eye of kakura receive an extra ability (in addition to feeling the evil of people he also feels the intention as haki of observation). Another idea is to wait until the 4th Ninja War and he awakens the Tenseigan directly in the war after he talks to the wise man of the 6 paths. Another point is that you should make it difficult to copy a kekkei genkai, if it was not going to get too boring beyond the time limit at the time of copying it should create this kekkei genkai, like a kekkei tota, (e.g. haku ice instead of being a mixture of water, wind and Yang mixes with another chakra nature like fire and make a freezing fire). Another point is the 3 years he spends with Jiraya in my opinion he should stay a year and then get sick of him and flee, to see other countries like a Jinchuuriki he should appreciate more the freedom he did not have, he should go after Zabuza and Haku for training where he develops his kekkei tota with the help of Haku.

from chapter 70