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Yeah I know. I simply copy and paste this specific comment. To state the fact that Paul is only station knight in the village. At least that’s what I think🤔.
When Phillip sent Paul to Buena Village, it was because Laws had requested help with the local monsters. Laws was not a knight, as he lacked the lineage to be one. At best, he was a peace keeper in charge of animal control. This is mentioned in Mushoku Tensei: A Journey Of Two Lifetimes. We don't really know much about Laws. I suspect he served some time in the local militia or was even a city guard. With his elf heritage, he may have been serving the Greyrat family for decades, and still a young man in his 60s. He was sent there as a form of semi-retirement. Likely, a newlywed. He had enough reputation and experience in his previous duties to be taken seriously. When Paul came begging for work, Phillip gave him the assignment. Laws is an interesting character, and we barely even know him. We barely even know him. I guess he might be in his 60s, but he could be any age. All we know is that until Clive was born, he was Elanalise's youngest kid, and Sylphie's father. He would havevbeen much older than Paul because of the casual manner they spoke with each other. Laws receives compensation for his work, as well. Paul, as a knight, would be his superior. But as fathers discussing their kids? Equal footing. . If ever there were a side story to tell, it would be that of Laws, son of Elanalise.
My favorite moment in this chapter would have been when Rudeus joins Zenith to the clinic and afterwards preforms the feminine etiquette greeting front of guests lol.
Maybe Paul trained him early than the canon light novel. Because he knew his son had a conscience at an early age compared to most children🤔.
I enjoyed hearing Rudeus mention Lilia, Zenith and Paul backstories. I think the funniest part would have to be how Paul described each of his friend that were members of the “fangs of the black wolf” adventurer party. And it ended with him getting slapped for giving one of them a bad remark.
lol those ladies ran away the moment they saw Zenith. They didn’t want to be caught flirting with Paul. Right in front of her.
True Zenith is pretty clueless when it comes to raising children and Rudeus. Which makes sense because it relates to our reality. How first time parents tend to mess up, especially when they’re not prepared.
Thank I’m gonna start reading your chapters now. Was previously busy with my chores😅
I’ll finish chapter 8 and 9 tomorrow. I reached my limit. I’m super tired🥱
Nice chapter and good job having Rudeus mention the historical events of the Laplace War. Along with Rudeus being outside for the very first time. Although I would’ve got rid of part where he’s using magic outside like that. It’s a little risky in my opinion. His parents or the neighbors outside could have saw him do that.