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sure.

MC is overshadowing Jin-woo, which is not a problem. But, if he keeps killing those who would have become Jin-woo's soldiers wouldn't that make Jin-woo weak at last , if that 's your plan, i don't mind. It's good until now.

Up Until Now , It looks really promising .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... but some small errors and mistakes are there , which are negligible but are there. Also, Naming her Sakura !? there are so many names and you had to pick Sakura didn't you !!?

*MP, This is MP stat, Isn't it ! ?

Up until the point I have read , this looks promising , but improvement can be made

I really appreciate the writing of this series up until now, I hope it continues this way 💯

TFCTC

Good Concept ,but there could have been a better way of presentation of the story but still not bad