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[You acquired 'Time Pocket Watch (Hidden)': Pressing the pocket watch enables you to reverse time, helping you evade dangers lurking in the shadows.]- GSUGS1mthCommented
this story is boringggh
Chapter 10: Deflowered - GSUGS1mthCommented
punctuation??
my father seeing that I was ignoring him and eating my food. He asked the servants to take the maesters to his study, where he could treat himself. He then asked all the people to take their respective seats. - GSUGS1mthCommented
why does it seem.like the English is becoming worse..
Lord Arryn led us through the castle. We were very curious to see the baby. We were fifteen and sixteen years old this year Robert being the older. That meant that there was quite a big gap between them and their so-called newborn brother. Robert and I are like bread and butter, inseparable. We have been very close Since developed together in Vale. - GSUGS1mthCommented
wearing rings to get skills is fine but still wearing rings wouldn't that just be someway.. what if his hands gets cut off heh. then what??
In no time, I was able to finished all the food with only bones left in the basket. - GSUGS1mthCommented
so swordsmanship, a physical activity caused pain and changes in his body but horse riding also a physical activity caused no pain at all wow
I didn't know how long it took, maybe 5 minutes or so but I felt like I've been in that state for years. Gradually, I stopped shaking, taking deep breaths like I run a marathon. - GSUGS1mthCommented
omniscient is part of omnipotent.. I though he was omnipotent
"I can only know what you think; I can't know what the future holds. I'm not omniscient." - GSUGS1mthCommented
sigh this drama again.. too old
"You see, the girl you call Emily lived thanks to your sacrifice and gets to grow up and she invents a cure for a deadly epidemic. If you hadn't sacrificed yourself to save her, the cure would have come out too late, and it would have caused billions of deaths." - GSUGS1mthCommented
what oil???
He was seen as the one who could break their shackles and free them from the tight grip of the empire that held them captive. But even with this liberation, a new power would rise in its place: the mighty Azania. Despite this, many were willing to trade one for the other , for they felt a stronger sense of connection and belonging to the sultanate rather than being mere pawns in the hands of foreign oil-drinkers. - GSUGS1mthCommented
Pls make it completely clear who is being talked about
The ironic twist was that it wasn't an enemy's capture that landed him in this dire situation. Instead, it was his own mounting debt that sealed his fate. No matter how hard he tried to escape the cities and find new companies to serve before his creditors came knocking, they always managed to catch up with him. - GSUGS1mthCommented
Jarza not Farza
He always claimed to have lost count of his age, but he knew deep down that he was well over forty. Despite his many years and countless battles fought, he remained a resilient bastard, refusing to go down without a fight. In his youth, he had been a formidable mercenary, Alpheo was certain that if he was to fight against him in battle, he would certainly piss his pants, he was no coward though , it was just Farza that was so scary to be around. - GSUGS1mthCommented
punctuation is inconsistent
"If you dare break another sack, even hell itself will not match the horrors I will unleash upon you," she bellowed in warning, her eyes boring into his with malice. - GSUGS1mthCommented
nothing is absolute
"Remember being of the Creator, you may struggle. You may believe in the impossible. You may be defiant. However, forward is your only option. The laws of time shall be obeyed BECAUSE TIME IS ABSOLUTE!!" - GSUGS1mthCommented
why be discreet about the numbers.. they are on the shirts.. one has to be blind not to see them...come on
Scary. No wonder he was given the name Code… he's thought just as far ahead as me, maybe even further. I'll trust him for now, but I still have to be discreet if I want to ask him about the numbers. With this question, I'll be able to fall back on some other things if he hasn't picked up on the numbers quite yet. - GSUGS1mthCommented
if the number is on the back of the t shirt why wouldn't anyone else apart from the mc notice
I probably shouldn't tell her about the numbers. I don't want anybody to panic or get more distressed than they might already be. Although, I wouldn't be surprised if she has noticed as well. - GSUGS1mthCommented
oh come is it male or female stop changing them... it makes reading irritating
Yi Lin's heart stirred, she took out the White Card that she always carried inside her clothes. - GSUGS1mthCommented
is he or she a male or female?? I am so confused right now..
Yi Lin emptied his bladder completely. - GSUGS1mthCommented
please what is this I and he and tge person.. please stop changing the 1 and 3rd person point of view so frequently juts used one
'What's going on!? Why can't I talk properly!? And why does my voice sound so high-pitched?' Pondered the man anxiously as he continued to speak, though each time he opened his mouth, only jumbled and unintelligent words were heard. - GSUGS1mthCommented
please punctuation
After what felt like a decent amount of time, my eyes finally got accustomed to the outside, granted, I might be mistaken, but I'm sure it usually doesn't take me this long to get accustomed to the brightness of the outside.