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    Los_zetas1mth
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    Author im not getting the vibe that he lost his entire family a few days ago. Some feedback from me is to show case the mc mental state and internal monologue when it comes to the deaths of his family. he seems to have forgotten about it. frankly beacause he has i feel like his feelings of revenge are hollow

    Six hours slowly trickled by as Luke travelled in one direction, North. His determination and flames of revenge that could burn even the Gods remained unwavering during these six hours. However, his physical body couldn't keep up with their intensity.
    Killing God: Wrath of the First Nephilim
    Fantasy · TheCulture
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    Los_zetas1mth
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    Hey author can you link me to discord.?

    Ch 1 Dark beginning
    Killing God: Wrath of the First Nephilim
    Fantasy · TheCulture
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