Renegade_Daoist
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Alright, this was meant to be a simple critical review, but this work is just so f**king great, that there's nothing to criticize. The writing is impeccable, the grammar is flawless, and the story line is easy to follow. I don't mean this in a bad way, but I kinda hope that your book gets pirated so that the whole world can read this story and enjoy it like I did.
its a rather good read, I believe. the scenes are explained in detail- especially Tian Long's alchemy, you obviously did a bit of research which makes the story believable, the plot is unfurling quire intrestingly, and the writing style is really simple. However, the cheeky maid dares laugh at her young master? how disrespectful!
Well, yet another author shameless review I guess. The book is about Seth, an ordinary broke down on his luck webnovelist like you and me who gets transmigrated into an eastern fantasy themed world. See what i did there, I said THEMED. meaning that any die hard xianxia fans who are foaming at the mouth because the mc isn't slaughtering people and raping jade beauties can chillax a bit. I myself am a hardcore Xianxia fan and as such I tried my very best to make them act like the characters of a xianxia while mixing in western elements while I'm at it. why? cos I fucking want to. its my work, i can do whatever I want. Anyways... The mc is western, the female mc has D.I.D, the next female supporting character is a lecherous pervert expertizing in dual cultivation, and the young masters are aged. that's about it I guess, enjoy!