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I understand where you are coming from, but you haven’t stated anything like that. You simply said why are they referring to Gabriel as Lord, I responded with the reasoning, and you got angry. Also, it’s a person transmigrated into Asia, she should be different and she stops acting like Asia in the later chapters, which I assume you didn’t read. And by acting like Asia, I mean she talks to people how Asia would, not does things Asia would. The only characters that I had to spin my own twist on is Griselda because she doesn’t appear in the anime. I agree that something need to stay canon, but the only thing I changed was Griselda arriving in Kuoh, so I don’t know where you got me changing everything into ỐC from. I respect your opinions and all, but please write with proper grammar and structure. I’m gonna go on with my day and you should too because this honestly isn’t that serious
I’m using the Lord title because Gabriel is known as a dude by believers. The only people who know Gabriel is a girl are people from the supernatual world. It makes sense to me for people to refer to her as a Lord. I’m not calling Asia a Lord because she’s known to be a girl. I’ll take what you said as advice, but you increasingly are making stupid remarks.
I’m thinking the same now. You cant type properly and read. I’ve stated that I based one thing off of the Bible which is the Lord title. The character is the same as stated in the DxD wiki. I’m trying to keep my patience talking to you, but it’s getting to the point where I think you’re just trying to irritate me. The warning in the synopsis is guess what? A warning! I don’t care if people don’t like my story. But you are just being stupid. Learn how to type coherently so I can understand your replies.
This isn’t even critism. Critism is to help people learn from their mistakes. You can’t just be negative and trash talk and call it critism. All I got from you “critism” was that you really like Gabriel and you didn’t read. Look, buddy. I don’t want to continue this, but if you keep adding stupid replies, I’ll keep going.
Bro, why are you so angry with Gabriel being addressed as a Lord? Are you obsessed with her? I don’t understand. Also, I wrote Gabriel as a girl in the story. This shows that you didn’t even read and just decided to write to hate for no reason. I don’t want argue with people on the Internet because it’s stupid, but you honestly need to do some social interaction. Learn how to chill out.
Reading FF and watching the anime are two different things. Yes, I read FF and thought it would be fun to write a FF. FF arent the best if you want to remember the story correctly. Also, I don’t know what chapter you read up to but there’s a thing called cautious. If you find yourself in a new body you don’t instantly assume you can just do whatever you want. She’s acting like Asia because it helps with her skill. I don’t like to be overtly negative but Gabriel’s a dude in the Bible. I don’t know where the whole make Gabriel a girl thing started from, but I’m basing her title off of that fact. Also, hating a story off of that is weird. Sorry if you don’t like my FF but it’s just a story written for fun. I don't want to be rude but I put a warning in the sypnosis. I got school to worry about and not trying to remember an ecchi anime. i hope you have a good day and find a FF you enjoy, but chill out.
I've already stated that I'm writing for fun, so there isn't much thought behind the chapters, but why would I follow the original story? There's kind of no point in writing an FF if it's just a recap of the OG story.
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If you want lol. I’m saving up for firefly rn
I modeled the trial after her so that’s probably why
Mb I misread it. I thought it said tomorrow was Friday
Yea I live in America
Saturdays and Sundays
This story is an AU because I really didn't want to follow the canon, and I just haven't seen DxD in a while; plus, I have a terrible memory. Issei's going to have something to do later on in the story, but he's not really needed right now. He will likely show up when I write about Rias and Riser's marriage, which is maybe in 7-10 chapters, depending on what route of the story I want to take. I just lowkey forgot about him when I was writing. Sorry if this doesn't answer some of your questions.
Thank you for telling me. I’ll change it
Dunno I haven’t seen DxD in like 2 years. I’m like writing off of my terrible memory and bits of random wiki knowledge
I assume they can hear the word but can't say it themselves. Otherwise, the exorcists would be spamming the word in the middle of fights with them
It’s an OC character