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SomePersonOfEarth1mthReplied to Im_LaZy_007I see
Chapter 4: Rabbit of Deforestation- SomePersonOfEarth1mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: The Goddess
- SomePersonOfEarth1mthReplied to Siamese
Thank you!
"The bear core isn't banned but isn't used very often, when you absorb a core you will slowly gain attributes similar to your core the more cores of the same type you absorb. The girl who welcomed you earlier has an elf based core and as such has gained the ears of an elf." Nick explained quickly slowly standing up, Asher seemed to have understood everything and this seemed to be the end of the conversation. - SomePersonOfEarth1mthCommentedCh 2 The Creek, the Sheep and the Warrior
- SomePersonOfEarth1mthReplied to Siamese
I am glad to hear that, that's exactly what I was going for!
It took over two hours of continuous cutting before all the meat had been safely put away in his inventory, the only thing left was the unusable parts. Asher threw them bit by bit into the fire until everything had been destroyed. He didn't want to leave a body in a place that could potentially be his home for the night if he failed to kill that monstrous rabbit, who knew what animals or monsters would be attracted by it. With a grunt Asher pushed himself into a standing position and left the cave, leaving behind the still lingering fire. It was about noon when Asher walked out of the cave, he could only assume that the giant rabbit would be in the same place he had left it. - SomePersonOfEarth1mthReplied to Im_LaZy_007
I have no clue what that is from but ya fair depiction lol.
Chapter 4: Rabbit of Deforestation - SomePersonOfEarth1mthReplied to Siamese
Lol thanks
"Fuck you!" Was all Asher said while raising both his middle fingers into the air, letting the shirt fall back into the box. - SomePersonOfEarth1mthCommentedCh 1 Red Sheep
- SomePersonOfEarth1mthReplied to Im_LaZy_007
Lol đ
Asher looked at the screen with confusion, he has been told that he would get an ability from the core, and while he did see that he had successfully absorbed the core and gotten a new title he didn't see the abilities line that had once taken up space on his status screen. An idea popped into his head after a second of rubbing his two brain cells together. - SomePersonOfEarth1mthReplied to Im_LaZy_007
Who knows lol
[Effect: -10% Mana Consumption] - SomePersonOfEarth1mthReplied to Im_LaZy_007Ch 1 Chapter 1: Welcome To The Multiverse
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Let me know if you made it this far!
"As for why the sword core doesn't cost more is because it hardly gives any good abilities, very few people get a combat ability out of it, most get some sort of blacksmithing ability, and the very unlucky get an ability related to the maintenance of the sword, it's considered a gamble at best and very few people are willing to take that chance with one of their core slots," the director said while sighing. Asher felt like the wind had gotten knocked out of his body, at first the sword core was the best option but if he got stuck with a lousy ability from a core that cost his entire fortune then he was fucked. - SomePersonOfEarth1mthPosted
Overall, not bad, there were a few grammatical errors here and there and a few spelling mistakes littered about, but the story is good and is interesting enough to keep you interested in the story. I can see this being really good if the author continues and eventually goes back through to edit the small mistakes.