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not even hiding you're using chatgpt?

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Getting tired of every novel portraying the church as something negative. It's an overdone trope

lol you think 7 days is enough to get over losing your family?

In real life this resolves nothing

I'm ngl, I'm not very interested in reading about the love life of someone who's supposed to cuck to mc

He's a little too happy to be arranging for his fiancee to be with another man, no? Even if he didn't want the engagement.

Ok, as long as there's direction that's fine. Enjoying the story so far.

Not super related to chapter, but I don't really like how Mia consistently sides against her brother. Feels like it downplays his significance to her and that she prioritizes 1. their parents over his autonomy of whether he would reveal himself to them, and now 2. Her friend/her own individualism over his wellbeing/their sibling relationship. Just a minor thing bugging me.

Loving the story so far. Surprisingly good world building and depth of characters. Only issue is that the love interests randomly become infatuated with the mc, which I think is poorly written. Aside from that, it's a great story.