DaoistJCJ2Nu
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DaoistJCJ2Nu1hCommentedhey author, is this deliberate to extend the word count
Blood tickled down her cheek but her attention was forced to move towards the students but she couldn't focus because —- DaoistJCJ2Nu4hCommented
balzer moment
Emily was wearing a girl's academic uniform, which was a black skirt just about her knees, thick black high socks, a white shirt, and a black balzer with a red lining at the edge. - DaoistJCJ2Nu4dReplied to Your_Daddy_9818
gif goes insanely hard ngl
"It has the potential of becoming a BBC." . - DaoistJCJ2Nu5dReplied to AbiLIonCh 22 New Mastery
- DaoistJCJ2Nu10dCommented
*her a prostitute
"You.want.make.her.prostitute?" Eli suddenly turned emotionless as he grabbed his hair and made Jayden look at him. - DaoistJCJ2Nu10dCommented
*wanted to
"You.want.make.her.prostitute?" Eli suddenly turned emotionless as he grabbed his hair and made Jayden look at him. - DaoistJCJ2Nu10dCommentedIt should be me, not him
- DaoistJCJ2Nu12dCommented
craving her*
She only tried to control the urge before but now she wanted him to mess her inside as this was the first time Eli seeing...no, the first man seeing her body and the man she loved was carving for her body just like her. - DaoistJCJ2Nu15dCommented
*fast or *quickly, not fastly
Seeing his physical attack didn't work, He was about to use his technique but suddenly he felt a sting pain in his back, Eli rubbed his back and realized his back was scratched by its nail and blood bled fastly. - DaoistJCJ2Nu15dCommented
*Clothes, men don't wear dresses. They might wear dress clothes, but not dresses.
Asher Eli and Lilith walked on the empty streets while both of them wore matching dresses and walked hand in hand. - DaoistJCJ2Nu15dCommented
"We're just getting started"
"We just starting" Eli said with a dangerous smile. - DaoistJCJ2Nu15dCommented
wait and get to know each other
"I wanted to wait and let each other know better but I can't. - DaoistJCJ2Nu15dCommented
*How do I leave then?* but even that's a strange sentence
"How should I go then?" Eli said with a little annoyance. - DaoistJCJ2Nu15dCommented
clothes, unless he's cross dressing
"I can order a dress for you?" Lily said she took her own phone. - DaoistJCJ2Nu15dCommented
*also sipped their green tea
Eli looked at Lily and Adria while sipping the coffee and like that Adria and Lily also did the sipping their green tea. In order to avoid any drama, Adria put a spell around them so that no one could notice unless they are Emperor Rank cultivators. - DaoistJCJ2Nu15dCommented
Also, not "and like that", use "likewise*
Eli looked at Lily and Adria while sipping the coffee and like that Adria and Lily also did the sipping their green tea. In order to avoid any drama, Adria put a spell around them so that no one could notice unless they are Emperor Rank cultivators. - DaoistJCJ2Nu15dCommented
*While sipping his coffee* or *while sipping coffee*, not the coffee
Eli looked at Lily and Adria while sipping the coffee and like that Adria and Lily also did the sipping their green tea. In order to avoid any drama, Adria put a spell around them so that no one could notice unless they are Emperor Rank cultivators. - DaoistJCJ2Nu15dCommented
First sentence is so wrong
Eli looked at Lily and Adria while sipping the coffee and like that Adria and Lily also did the sipping their green tea. In order to avoid any drama, Adria put a spell around them so that no one could notice unless they are Emperor Rank cultivators. - DaoistJCJ2Nu15dReplied to DaoistJCJ2NuCh 22 New Mastery
- DaoistJCJ2Nu15dCommentedCh 22 New Mastery