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    peerless_prince23 days ago
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    A gripping dark fantasy that dives deep into pain, mystery, and self-discovery. With a broken protagonist, an eerie imaginary friend, and a world full of secrets, it’s a story that pulls you in and doesn’t let go. If you’re into emotional stories with mind-blowing twists, you’ll love this one!

  • peerless_prince
    peerless_princea month ago
    Replied to WWoInfinitismaloWW

    thank you very much for the comment, just an explanation for the first chapter and the upcoming second, I wanted it to drag the readers in, must individuals find it hard to properly immerse into a story without intensive descriptions, the story is meant to capture every essence of sadness but I do appreciate your feedback.

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    peerless_prince2 months ago
    Commented

    This chapter appears to be somewhat inconsistent with the character development of Caspian. In the previous chapters, he was portrayed as a fearless and ruthless individual, yet in this chapter, he seems nervous while speaking to the officer. Additionally, Caspian was previously depicted as someone who could commit murder without hesitation, but now he appears to be hesitant and unsure. The writing style also seems to be deviating from the established characterization of Caspian. The pacing is too fast, and we have not yet gained a comprehensive understanding of Caspian's background or the significance of the ring.

  • peerless_prince
    peerless_prince2 months ago
    Commented

    This chapter provided a solid introduction to the main storyline, though it lacked sufficient context and explanation. The abrupt transition into the central narrative may have left readers feeling disoriented. Despite these shortcomings, the overall quality of the writing was impressive.

  • peerless_prince
    peerless_prince9 months ago
    Posted

    very detailed keep up the good work my friend I wish you success

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    peerless_prince9 months ago
    Commented

    this is really detailed😌

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