So far I really enjoy the story. Do you have any love interests in mind, author? I always thought that there were some good love interests in tokyo revengers and I'm curious who you plan to make Kayne's love interests. Of course if you would not like to spoil it, you don't have to. I'm looking forward to continuing this story no matter what.

Interesting so far. looking forward to seeing where it goes. If you could, No Issei please. He's really annoying and would be a issue if you plan to incorporate Rias in the story.

The goat is back with another great story. you did a great job again author. Please make sure you dont overwork yourself or something author. Everything you make is great but having like 5 stories at the same time might be hard to manage.

One of the only stb FF on here and I'm very happy it's this good. Keep up the good work author! Also so far there's no problems with your English, so thank you for putting care into that!

This is extremely underrated. Thank you for the respect you are showing to Pokemon. I can tell that you are knowledgeable about the series which makes me have high hopes for the future. Also plus for having quintuplets.

Author, can you please verify who sold themself for money in chapter 4? It was the client, right? Not Leone?

Amazing story. Love mushoku tensei so excited to see what you do with the story. Also make sure not to make the world to degenerate. I remember hating how degenerate the original mushoku tensei was. It was really unnecessary. I remember when rudeus walking in on a maid and noble. Ewwww. Just please don't make it as bad as the original.

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Really looking forward to seeing his development with everyone. There's so many stories that don't use most of the one piece characters but this one does. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................

Interesting and well executed. Its cool how you incorporated devil fruits and blood bending. Really curious how shettys family not dying in the plane crash will change the plot.

Really good. Character descriptions are normal and a little repetitive but not annoying. You absolutely deserve a better rating. Overall a great and interesting story with a future.

Criminally underrated. I'm supprised it isn't more popular yet. Don't worry author, with all of the characters you put in that you dont see in other stories, it's only a matter of time before it gets popular. Keep working hard and it will pay off!