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I liked the story. The hero developed in the right direction. But the romantic plot was a bit out of place. It was even a bit annoying. I didn't like it, and I skipped the dialogue.

If this is a translation, then I was wrong to attack

Again, the chapter is about nothing. Just a bunch of information.

Too much unnecessary information just two empty chapters. You can reduce the information and open it over time.

Сомневаюсь

these are all translations from chinese

Другой тоже. Переводят два разных автора

Это перевод

(https://www. 69shuba.com/book/87655.htm)