Yo Cicada here , the wn, ln, mahua, manhwa and manga trash man . I read anything as Im too bored to pass up anything
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yo cicada here the story so far has a good start and i could see this developing into a great story . some pointers can be :
- The word divine is used too much
- Each paragraph is short and contains only 1 dialogue