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I'm remaking it, please be patient. I promise to work on it more tonight.
My bad did i retcon my the story)
Instead of criticizing my work because you dislike it, perhaps you should write your own story if you think you can do better, which I doubt you can.
In this alternate universe, I believe the Faunus should be portrayed as stronger characters. Given their animalistic senses and abilities, it makes sense for them to be above the average human. Additionally, we need to consider their Semblance and Aura as well. RWBY struggles with power scaling, so please don't attempt to offer any flawed explanations..
Restriction for him being to OP
Because it is.
Please give me a little more time, and thank you for your patience in supporting my series. I'm feeling a bit stuck—not so much with how I want the story to begin, but rather with the overall worldview of the narrative. I am not satisfied with my explanation of the power system. Dishonest will come back my friend, just please wait patient.
Apologies for the grammar; I was kind of rushing due to my busy schedule. 😔 😔
Yes, it was inspired by it. It was a masterpiece!
I have so many fanfics that are just sitting here, collecting dust! LOL!