it's a book with great potential be sure to give it a shot

Well I personally like fast pace novels. I get bored in slow ones. Be fast and have more events in the novel

No, we will have r18

Thanks, man. You also keep up your good work. I love both of your works.

One last question sorry for just sending comments. Do you have a Discord server perhaps ?

I have 18 chapters @1000 words but not many readers so far.

I pray for your success.

I see. I am also writing a new novel. I guess there is no hope for me then. Lol

Why don't you get a contract with the web novel? Your other novel has enough chapters and quality. Weird. This was my question for a long time I wanted to ask.

And I wanted to show the pure power of the vampires.

As the story progresses, I will make sure to use the system more. For these chapters, I want to focus on the story. But He will use the system more in the upcoming chapters.

Alexa does not question Elena and even if Elena tells her to kill herself she will do it on the spot. Read Alexa's Past chapter. Even when Elena said she did not need dinner or food, Alexa did not question her. her loyalty to Elena is absolut.

If I were in that man's position I would have jumped out of the window and committed suicide. Lol. Poor dude

I just published a new chapter explaining the Bloodlines. Check it out.

Lesser and greater vampires are not immortals and only have a lifespan of 1000 years. And also they can't control blood for attacking and only have stronger bodies. You can think of them as slave vampires. while vampires with immortals in their name are true immortals. Immortal vampire is the lowest rank of Immortal vampires, Immortal Arch Vampires are of higher rank and they are only second to Primordials. As for power, An Immortal Vampire simply can't win against an Arch Vampire. Arch Vampire have access to Arch Vampire Form and Primordials have access to True Vampire Form. When A lower-rank vampire goes against a higher rank, the bloodline of a higher-rank vampire can easily surpass a lower-rank one. if you have any questions feel free to ask.

I added a few lines at the end.

And yeah I was afraid I screw it again so I used ai this time

Hmmm is it still suck? I am afraid I will spoil story

I changed it. Could you please check it again? Thanks, man, and sorry for the trouble.

If you have time could you please check the book I published? I finally published it after such a long time.