Unsupervised_Idiot

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I'm a huge anime fan, I just started writing web novel because I didn't find anything I liked

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Unsupervised_Idiota day ago
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Reminds me of Rhaegar and Robert
Unfortunately, enduring the Knight's attacks was rapidly becoming impossible.
Shadow Slave: Mahoraga
Book&Literature · Fooly_rlly
Unsupervised_Idiot7d ago
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FINALYYY!! I'm sick and tired of these divine aspect merchants
One more thing to add, I started a new fanfic called Shadow Slave: Odysseus so go read that. I ain't hoping people will donate powerstones to it cause the upload time gonna be ass, similar to Wish Upon a Star. I js hope people will comment on it a lot. It's inspired by many fics so it's going to be really fun. And unlike most, Odysseus won't have a Divine Aspect. The whole Divine Aspect concept is overused tbh.
Shadow Slave: Mahoraga
Book&Literature · Fooly_rlly
Unsupervised_Idiot7d ago
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It's fine but there are rooms for improvement. You can delve a little deeper into how the war unfolds
A/N - Writing wars are my weakness. They're way too hard too write and you can't split them into sections cause they'll look awkward. Imagine describing a battle between three or four individuals multiple times and calling it a war. So I spent my time reading the ss war arcs like Throne War, Crimson Spire Seige, and Eternal City to learn how to write it. But eh ion think I did well, was it good?
Shadow Slave: Mahoraga
Book&Literature · Fooly_rlly
Unsupervised_Idiot7d ago
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Reminds me of Neph and Sunny's fight in FS
Now all that remained... was violence.
Shadow Slave: Mahoraga
Book&Literature · Fooly_rlly
Unsupervised_Idiot17d ago
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So basically tanya tanya
"My Aspect grants me the ability to fly and weave spells. The spells themselves depend on the formulas I've learned."
Shadow Slave: Mahoraga
Book&Literature · Fooly_rlly
Unsupervised_Idiot20d ago
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I got lost while hiking up the mountain and asked a shepherd where we were. He smiled and said, "Shadow Slave: Mahoraga." That's how I realised, we were at the peak
At that moment, Sunny finally recognised what that smile was — it was an ambitious smile, a greedy smile, a crazy smile, and a hungry smile.
Shadow Slave: Mahoraga
Book&Literature · Fooly_rlly
Unsupervised_Idiot24d ago
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And yep! Speedran becoming hitler
It was as though the sun itself had descended upon the earth, annihilating thousands of Awakened and incinerating immeasurable hordes of Nightmare Creatures in its wake.
Shadow Slave: Mahoraga
Book&Literature · Fooly_rlly
Unsupervised_Idiot24d ago
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A whole lotta nun I understood
The Golden Ratio.
Shadow Slave: Mahoraga
Book&Literature · Fooly_rlly
Unsupervised_Idiot24d ago
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Fang Yuan ahh narration 😭✌️
Whether he lived because of luck, coincidence, or some twisted whim of Fate itself meant nothing. The only thing that mattered was that he was still alive.
Shadow Slave: Mahoraga
Book&Literature · Fooly_rlly
Unsupervised_Idiot24d ago
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The Sun
Shadow Slave: Mahoraga
Book&Literature · Fooly_rlly