Rak_Kir

The story is fun to read and see the characters advance. For what its worth i enjoy the story even thought you see a lot content form MMorpg's. Some of my only pains is the Main characters special is to one sided. The women in the main characters camp are for the most part very one sided or under written and are very mhm and boring.

For what its worth the Story is very enjoyable, Its refreshing to have a Female lead in a beast taming novel. My take so far This novel could have been so much better with out trying to throw in transmirgration into the mix. Every time it gets used in the plot it feels forced and makes the story seem less enjoyable. Keep up the good work

I will say i couldn't finish this story. It was enjoable up to a point. It had many good plot idea which made it a baerable read. But the writer would constant make rules only to break them for the MC with in2-3 chapters. the worst i felt what the flow of time in the writers story got broken so many times that i was shaking my head at how anything got done, This alone made it hard to feel anything for the MC. I mean i know this is a OP MC weak to strong type story. But when you follow the time the MC goes throught and use smiple math that the Writers uses to acount for his learning or gathing things, there is many times where the MC time is in the months only for the next chapter to reduce that time from 2 months to days. not going to lie i made it into the 2k chapter range before it just got boring and the time inconsistencies made it hard to choke on whats came next.

overall I am enjoying the read. But the Grammer errors make you shake your head and make it so you need to take a break to make sense of the grammer