Kirito99

I am honestly telling everyone, this is one of the top three best books I have ever read in my life until today. I especially like the author's comments at the end of every chapter. I actually wanted to give only 4 and half a star for character design because I think it would be even better if we could see the pictures of all the important characters present so that we can visualise the characters when mentioned which gives the reader a deeper feeling of the story. Genuinely thought it deserves a 5 star rating. All the best Mr.aurthor. keep up the good work, and complete the book ASAP. Because I can hardly wait for the ending.

Good, but not perfect. Don't worry, you will definitely write a perfect one in the future for sure.😉

It is overall a good story,but it can still be improved(by adding the character design) please try to implement it ASAP. Keep up the good work. All the best!! 👍

Overall, it is a good story. But it will feel better if we know what the characters look like so as to imagine them while reading which increases the readers mood and helps them feel content. please look into it ASAP. Keep up the good work. All the best!! 👍

honestly, the story sure is good, but it felt like the MC is too much of a fool(though it could also be seen as his character's starting nature). It would be more good looking if there were at least the character's pics like the MC, his main friend and other important people. But I am really disappointed regarding the story update stability.

It really is a good book, but it would feel nice if the readers could get to know about the name of the beasts and get to see the characters(especially the male and female leads and the beasts of the MC). But overall I think it is good but it needs to be updated with the above details ASAP. Keep up the good work All the best!!👍