No no, it changed for sure.

Truth be told: Your storytelling and especially your dialogues improved a lot. If you remember vaguely I criticized your conversations back then. Now it's much better!

Just want to keep you informed. Still reading, still amazed! Keep going!

When are the next chapters coming??

How to donate though?

Keep it going please! Always reading yours and then SS!

Please add her rank of aspect and some more details about her memories. Maybe in the same way guilty does? Good work!

Very nice! Do you talk with guilty about interactions with Sunny and background story or do you just go as you want?

Hey! You are doing great! I think you already improved your writing skills a lot. Greatly appreciated!! Like it a lot and looking forward to reading your story every day, so keep it up, please cause iam counting on you.

I really like your fanfiction but if you want to take constructive criticism. The dialogues are sometimes a little off, like two persons wouldn't talk like that to each other. Apart from that, great work :)

Good story! Well done and keep it going, please!

Nice side story of Shadow slave. Can't have enough lore! Rain's mother is quite an interesting character as well. Some adventures into the dream realm would be great! Keep it going, please!