Lord_Freezer

I want to like this story but your use of ai is very heavy handed, particularly in the last chapter. Perhaps work on your descriptions as you're very repetitive and long winded atm.

Typical chaos gacha slop. The biggest loser pos 'protagonist'. The only thing worse than chaos gacha is waifu catalogue. This is genuinely the worst thing I've read all year.

Started out well, turned into standard harem slop though. Between that and how little the mc actually does it became extremely dull and repetitive.

Damn I had hope for this story but I've just seen who the author is. On to the next one I guess.

Some kind of mongoloid wrote this...............................................................................................................

Standard chinese slop..............................................................................................................................................

Neaver really a fan of villain mcs personally but I can look past that if they're well written. However you've basically just crammed all of the edge into a single person. This knock off darth vader just doesn't make any sense at all in this setting. So yea character design os just terrible.

Rambling and repetitive. Pacing is extremely slow. Characters spend half their time in their heads. Almost nothing ever happens. What was initially a very promising story is just dull and a new disappointment with every notification of an update. This is going nowhere and it's taking the long route there.

Pacing is extremely slow. Characters spend half their time in their heads. Almost nothing ever happens. What was initially a very promising story is just dull and a new disappointment with every notification of an update.

Just saw you were the guy who wrote that weiss crap as well. Tried that yesterday, wasn't worth the effort of a shit review it was so bad. Dude you need to go outside and talk to people, you clearly have no idea what normal dialogue consists of.