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Nothing really to say negative wise. The story has a good start and the story line is very interesting

This was a very good start! The romantic was a little rushed but it fits with their characters well. Keep it up !!!!

I’m so sorry about your dad may he rest in peace. Hope your ok

Love the story so far. I’m curious to know the release dates of new chapters? Can I please know your schedule?

Instead of one massive paragraph please split it up it’s easier to read

Welcome back bro! Hope my 3 power stones helped

Likings the story keep it up 👍

I hope this is you starting uploading more?

I’m looking forward to seeing how this story turns out. Keep pushing the story and posting chapters your hard work will pay off.

Why you not posting? Hope everything is ok?

Loving this story

What an awesome idea for a story is cannot wait to see where it it goes

I need more chapters this is such a good story

This is a solid story idea I’m looking forward to seeing what you do with it

Good start, Don’t abandon it keep up the hard work and it’ll pay off. The story is good so have faith in it.

Please more it’s such a good story

Really loving this 👍 and keep the the chapter’s flowing your hard work will pay off

You got me for a second 😂 glad your back and looking forward to the next chapters

I get you bro. So just to clarify are you still gonna post on here?