Vexan

my head theory for this chapter, elion hadnt heard of isla in his own timeline. the moon is the king that rose to godhood. he sits and watches his lineage, in godhood he understands the trial and such. isla is going to die and the god knows and sends a feeling of loss to elion and that makes him sad. makes sense if isla isnt around in elions time, course maybe she is and he never payed enough attention to the world outside of the academy. just throwing theories out there.

Honestly a king that knows his place and his subjects place without cruelty or being a total pushover is so rare to find. Melroy at the moment seems to be a well written character.

no the current arc seems to be building up to it though.

it does happen eventually yes. forget what chapter but he does end up getting the skill where he can guarentee his girls pregnancy.

typo here, arwin not cedrick

leaving a comment on my own review to say i gave world background 3 stars, only because we dont fully understand the map of how the school city is layed out, but in later chapters you learn about some kingdoms and such, you dont know what direction there in or the layout of this world but you at least know they exist. also theres dungeons but you dont know how deep the schools is or how they relate to the world at large

195 chapters in, and it's a "i came for the smut but stayed for the plot". Im genuinely enjoying the story for where its going and how things are being set up. i dont know how to really write a review, im going to say it this way. the writing is good and enjoyable to read. there are 3 chapters where its like in the future from what is currently happening. those 3 chapters do feel a little odd and out of place but you can still enjoy the novel without diving to deep into them. Tldr its good at least give it a try.

clearly had some kind of crush/interest in him this entire time. cant wait to see how this particular pair interact in the future.

If na-rin is with them hope she can get natasha to trust her a bit more. someone needs to crack natashas possessiveness a bit.

Gonna leave this as a little extension if you decide to read this. i think your stories great obviously, but im going to say haris and hannah the duo are kinda lacking in the background, need more attention to their roles in the group even if its minor. Also i dont know how the character stuff works when viewing about the book etc, but even if you dont have pictures i think jaxons group so to speak is large enough you may want to add some descriptions and male female etc. in one of the latest chapters i vaguely forgot claire was one of the students until she tripped.