Hey All. Author here. If you have any constructive Criticism about the story so far. I would love to hear it. I still wish to improve a lot on writing . also any question feel free to sound off. I'll try to answer those as best as I can in this very earlier stage of the story thus far. Welp. back to writing I go!

You ask all the good questions my friend. : )

thank you.

More stuff bout the DQ will becoming next chapter. The Stockholm syndrome thing isn’t the case or shouldn’t be the case. This will be expanded upon in Next chapter as well if that helps. This chapter is the calm before the storm. But if it is an unsatisfactory chapter in terms of momentum I’ll try to get it ironed out. 👍

What seems to be the confusion?