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james, 8yrs old, netflix originals
I'm translating this, personally I identify a lot with the comment in the final chapter (from "Richard_Lopez_8306"), you could have played with various plots or even expanded the world but everything comes to nothing, Ron with his irrational hatred that can be justified by dumbledore but it still continues hating him in the end, everyone has -1 iq... seriously, in his 2nd year he has a god, a GOD, a sorceress(?) or absolutely ancient witch, transcendental even, one of the "best" witches that they have come out of Hogwarts completely recovered, but none of the 3 can put 1 cell together and discover that there is a fucking monster in the school and instead they just let it go until Harry literally comes along with the solution, and regarding this, seriously ? He was trained from a young age, cured of his traumas (relatively because the consequences are never really shown) but he decides to use an obviously bewitched object (whether he knows it evilly or not) and decides to give him complete access to his very being like, they never showed him all his books to that magic is fickle? The Avengers universe is shown but it is never expanded or deepened, I had to skip some chapters because nothing happened, absolutely nothing, and in the end it ends with more than 10 (I think, by the second chapter the interest was gone ) of pure unbridled sex, I say, for that just do a time-skip and I'll go to what I'm going to see, I really saw a lot of potential, I'm not asking for 50 chapters forming the first conversation with a possible suitor (although there are very good stories with that format) but if you are going to open possibilities then explore them without fear and let your imagination fly, everything ended in the 2nd year because Dumbledore was impulsive and they sent him to hell at once, I really hope to find a story of yours some time later and see how Make improvements, but for now I really can't give it a good rating because it doesn't grab me in any way, it's the first time I need to write a review because I don't feel like the story has been taken advantage of.
That bastard escapes from the maximum security space prisons and my brother thinks that humans can hold him
tambien teni que tener perso mi compa, hablarle hasta que se olvide todos tus defectos vosavi mixan