Daniel_Jog

I believe there was also a guy who just made a list. do not remember who. One was just tech though

chaos gacha, look it up and you have this system exactly

This story is great. However the one thing that brothers me greatly is the lack of challenge from the world. It feels like the author does not want his MC's to be challenged (other story synopsis). Furthermore I like the cozyness of the café vibe, but I would like to see some more things happening there. Somehow it doesn't really translate feeling the author wants to convey. It feels repetitive except for the family get togethers.

oh no

#teagoat

I keep giving you stones, because I like your story. However your story's roboticness is getting to me. I hope you will be able to change him a bit as part of his character development

This is just pure telling. Show us!! First rule of writing man

You could combine this with first make him feel vulnerable again. His current powers do not work so he has to develop something new. Would like this without the system in his head, otherwise it is just the system working not him

Yes!!! Hope this is gonna be hilarious

You are 6, you don't sound like a 6 year old. Especially not and uneducated 6 year old