Aryevrath_Gaggar

Quality and writing is good but iIdont think the author rly cares Abt this story. chapters are being repeated left and right and the pacing is also a problem... I along with a lot of ppl have mentioned this in comments for quite some time with no real action being taken

the story kinda fell off in the middle therer but im glad to see tht its back to its amazing quality once more.

true that brother

the story is a pile of shit. mc acts like and ai made chinese young master. now ill add more characters so the post is valid: eqoirgoeighiweurhgioerghergerwgwrth

author senpai u gud bro chap repeat why??

nice chap dude but i do feel like it was a bit small and filler this time around. Though i do suppose that that is also nececary. Would really prefere the chapters be a bit longer though so long as they dont affect the quality of the story. This is one of the best fanfics on this site rn and id rather keep it that way. Keep it up G [img=recommend]

nice chap but what happened to the system? why is he not buying shit?????

its a unique taste on danmachi acn tell it has a lot of potential

thanks for the chapter but i do have an inconsistency id like to mention. he did ask for joining the loki familia but that should have been more than a month if not 2 or three months ago at this point right? didnt he go to familias far smaller and the been tortured by evilus after failing to join loki or am i wrong here, author pls elaborate???