Sword_Idiot

The story is written very professionally, with detail given to every character. Detail is given to the subtle things that most writers do tend to forget that adds humanity to the characters. I would suggest adding detail to scenery, slow the pacing, and add more mundane between dramatic moments to let the reader know the characters better.

Also the same offer for you, I have like 100 pages of this I need to work on if I want to continue writing it. I can give access to it all if you promise to give helpful notes in the google docs to help me write it out. My discord info is swordidiot with the same book cover as my profile pic.

If you want, since you enjoy this stuff I can open my google docs to you and you can read all of it. My only request in return is you help me write by giving feedback on my writing. My discord info is swordidiot with the book cover as my profile pic

I did write more but I decided to not post it because it was AI assisted

Rating myself 5 stars for my old work, please check it out! I am working on a new one that should be even better!

Rating myself 5 stars for my old work, please check it out! I am working on a new one that should be even better!

Rating myself 5 stars for my old work, please check it out! I am working on a new one that should be even better!

Hello I am also a NTR author, and I look up to you great mentor! I would love to work with you and talk about these dark arts, my discord is swordidiot

Thank you! The story right now will kinda end abruptly because I didn’t work on the rest of it