Sword_Idiot

You should only use 'thoughts' and double "words" character say, otherwise this gets confusing fast. Other than that, good start!

The story is good in concept but heavily rushed, almost on sped up. Who the main character is, why do we care about the side female characters are all sorta left out. You can tell the author plans to explain everything later on but it doesn’t make sense, since your reading without knowing wtf is happening. Author needs to realize we cannot read his mind, explain everything out slowly. I cannot picture something if I barely know what is happening.

Author here, just letting readers know I am considering to continue this book. I am right now at a cross road between continuing this one or writing a whole series btw

lol the goal is to capture not kill anyone, but it is a dungeon

I am currently busy irl and need to write more chapters. Sorry for the delay, it will be a week before posting resumes.

Goblin evolution goes hob goblin, then to orc as planned right now. Goblins and hob goblins sex = goblin orc sex = orcs So until a goblin evolves to the next stage there cannot be other species yet. Sorta like a evolution tree with goblins at the bottom.

New original perspective on the rebirth genre that is fun to read. The descriptions in the combat scenes were quite thrilling while the characters communication could usesome refinement. A solid read for people looking for thrill with a new take on a familiar theme.

Masterpiece is the only word to describe this story. It has some of the highest quality writing I have ever seen, with some of the best written characters I have ever read. I only wish the genre was more for males because wow this is amazing.

A spy thriller with a focus on characters and the mission at hand. The story has some minor flaws like needing more details, but I believe the author will solve them soon. If you are into spy thrillers and want to support a good author I recommend this story.

No thanks, I am good