JokingWind45103

Thanks for this notice I might have stopped reading if you had not sent this message as I also don't like much stretch out one's

A very good Naruto fanfic I have read many fan fics but this concept is new and quite fun to read , you should also read other books by this author I only read Pokemon but that also is a great one

well chapter was nice but you didn't tell us what mind wishper meant or atleast the green reaction it

well is it just me or the black nova looked like an advance version of hollow purple

hm i think you should show how frieza deal with resurrected earth fighter and after that you can do timeskip

author you skipped few chapters

you know how zeno always have his 2 guards with him so the theory is zeno need to fuse with both of them to gain his true form

Author if you can't find much time to show on frieza then you can do a time skip when frieza reaches planet earth or when something interesting happens

will frieza take advantage of fat buu and make him a captain in his army or will he simply just kill him