Houston_Zumwalt

I absolutely love this story!!! The writing is good, the character is good. honestly it is wonderful, tho I do have one remark which I mean doesn't entirely matter right now because the story is in the early stages, but you might lose some audience who are die hard MHA fans if you don't involve Midoriya more. It's not that big of a deal right now because the story is just beginning, but when it gets to the later part's people who are huge MHA fans will definitely want to see Midoriya using One For All to beat some people up, especially Tomura. But truly I love it and I don't mind that Midoriya isn't too involved, this is just me thinking of those people who love the canon story and might want to see a little of that introduced.

I honestly am loving your story so far! it's rather epic tbh! I was going to give four stars on the story development because I personally thought that Golden boy died too quick, but when I stopped to think about it that makes sense. I mean he dies in the beginning of Gen V and then the mystery is why. So having him die early isn't actually a bad thing at all, helps for drama 😁 so honestly a solid 5 out of 5. The grammar is great, the emotions are great and the story is great. please keep writing! I just read all 12 chapters today and already want more!😇

I actually just found your story and I have to be honest, I absolutely love it! it's hilarious and you do the Deadpool break the fourth wall thing perfectly!! it's amazing. I hope that you will keep writing it. I'm not that far in yet, but I'm loving it

Hello! I have to be honest this is the first time I've actually given a story on this app a full five stars! You're story is amazing, I absolutely love it and have actually low-key read your story twice and just restarted it a third time like three or four days ago 🤣. I'm a sucker for these cute romance stories with redemption in it. I have always wanted Draco to be a far more complicated and conflicted individual. while reading this I keep thinking of one thing when I think of Draco, he's like a severely emotionally damaged unicorn 🤣 and Hermione is like his only anchor in the world, she's the shepherd and caretaker and he's the damaged unicorn 😁. Also I'm blown away by your grammar and way of expressing how characters look or feel when they talk. you paint very clear emotional images that hold immense power. like when Draco is breaking down in the astronomy tower and Hermione finds him. deep stuff!

I gotta be honest. I am loving this story! I mean there are some grammatical errors, like sometimes when a word is supposed to be plural you forget to add the 's' on the end, but truly a wonderful piece of work. I've actually read it twice, but idk I like it, so I'm on my third read through. 😂 seems like every time you upload a new chapter I might just restart the story from the beginning again. Helps keep the story flowing in my head. Another thing I like is having him cousins with the Weasleys, I think that's an awesome addition!

I'm going to be 100% real here. this is not something I knew I needed in my life, but I'm only three chapters in and it's exactly what I needed in my life. this is an amazing story and I do notice that in the first chapter you mentioned that English isn't your first language which is mind-boggling because it is so good and I'm actually listening to it like listening to it. you know it's it's talking rather than me reading it and I haven't heard really any errors and so power to you. It's awesome that it's not your first language yet, you're really good at it. also low key. this comment might not be actually grammatically correct at all because I'm using speech to text. but it is. it is good and I'm really liking it. and I actually went to college for creative writing, editing and English teaching and at least up to chapter three. if I was your editor I I wouldn't have much to edit actually. great work thank you.

I really enjoy this story. I'm excited and extremely interested to see where you're going with it! Thank you for writing this and I truly hope you continue!😁

I truly am enjoying this story! I may even say I really like it. I honestly think this is what the One Piece world would actually be like if Oda didn't have a habit of planning away from explaining and showing the darker stuff. I also love how the crew is different, I mean they're close enough that it seems true to the canon, but still completely different people. It's a true recreational of the world in your own vision. Thank you for telling your version of One Piece. 😁

I am really enjoying this story. Low key my comment might have spoilers for demon slayer for those who haven't finished it. I actually really like demon Slayer and absolutely love One piece, so this crossover is incredibly enjoyable for me. I also love the dynamic between Tomioka and the crew. But if this is after the battle with Muzan, then how is Tomioka still alive? His mark should have killed him a little while after the battle because those with the mark die before 25, so is this after he dies? Does he just wake up in the one piece world after dying from the mark?