Grand_Void_Daoist_4510

Many grammatic errors ,but still good ,just some fixing , but if that's what your best is , then hehehe

Good book ,update demand is too high, plz update ,

I have to comment ,its still good, but there some words that I can't understand ,they are not in English , plz transolate,but , thanks , it's good

I have to comment ,its still good, but there some words that I can't understand ,they are not in English , plz transolate

Okay , thanks for the support , I'll be improving whatever you pin point out

still good ,but realms are somehow confusing, is it Dao foundation or Foundation Establishment realm?

Seen this book from Maulanah's list, and iIliked it ,didn't know that it would be this goood Message to the Author : Don't drop this ,continue with the work! Message to the readers : If you don't read this ,then Humph ![it's your loss anyway]

goooodddd

Are you a porn star ? You are really talented at this When I need a chapter that's above 18 in my novlel [One Ability to invincibility] , I'll come to you for advice . the overall thing is biiiiiggggg keep it up [hahahahahahaha]

yeah , let's continue , also wrote my book that's called One Ability to invincibility , check it out