This fanfiction it's very well-designed, it doesn't have the typical story cliche that many Naruto fanfics have, the well uses the history and techniques that bove literary universe can bring to us. Also the amazing character design and well use of them, like the relation between Satoru and Sunnade. The only thing that I do not feel comfortable with is how Satoru humiliates other characters, it's funny sometimes but the way some characters like Mei or Ai make them look like clowns and not like the leaders that they are, and making the Fanfiction lose seriousness.