this is a captivating story so far, from ch 1 to ch12 i like it 👍👍👍 Hoping this will not get ridiculous dramatic as time goes on.

a well written and captivating story so far. 👍👍👍

Evan has becom even more ruthlessly cunning after reaching Utopia. 😂

on the previous chapter with the re- emergence of Valery and Anastasia's appearance at Utopia i am guessing that there will be a significant occasion where these 3 people would meet.

my sentiments too after the mc spent 1 year at the "world" between Arora and Utopia.

i believe the backstory for Valery's sudden appearance of a monarch core is too contrived and inorganic to the main story. i have asked a question about 200 chapters ago as to why the Arora characters were casually removed (ignored?) from the story.

after reading ten chapters, i take my hat off to the author for his excellent portrayal of a hospital and its staff of medical personnel. the amount of arcane medical terminology made my brain bleed.

i am not grossed out from reading about a disgustingly horrid situation. it doesn't even bother me seeing in movies. but it would be very nauseating to experience it in real life.

After reading several chapters i find this story quite engrossing. the storyline is unique in my opinion, hopefully the progression gets better until the finale [img=update][img=recommend]

the story is good so far, except for it's rather fast paced flow. i find this story promising. 👍👍

how does a mere reader "review" a story? or any other stories for that matter.

the way the game devs having a heart attack from their programmings is hilarious 😂😂

this is amusing, imagining a high lvl NPC protecting a beginner noob. 🤣🤣

i am enjoying this story 👍👍👍😎😎

after reading several chapters , i can't help but notice that everyone in this novel does not seem to eat or drink anything. and potions were never mentioned. how strange. 🤔🤔

in the previous chapter and this chapter there was an overabundance of "Not only that" 🥱🤐

😂😂😂😂

i find it disturbing that many webnovel authors make their male mc's as simp cucks.

after reading the first two chapters, i decided to stop reading this story. because for the life of me i cannot understand the terminologies being used. those terminologies are too foreign to me, despite having read many manhwas. i profoundly apologize dear author for not being asian enough to comprehend.

the pathetic mc is getting dumber by the minute. <criticism> what is it with these manhwa authors being simp cucks? always elevating the females as superior to men. how sad. .