Can you proof read a bit? :P Its repeated three times when he talks with Tracy... Anyway, more chapters please. It's pretty good. Hmm i dont remember where Joel was in original story at this time, i wonder when they appear again.

What did you mean by that comment?

So you wont even explain HOW is he changing terrain and everything in the box, when he cant even do simple runes and normal magic? Just "magicaly" did it all in few hours, not even exhausted? Yes makes perfeeeect sense~

How was it not taken away from him with all the aurors and all is more curious for me lol?!

Scarbato, scarbate... beetle named earlier. From description though, it is absolutely certain that it is niffler...........

I tried looking for mtl version, but no luck..... Even "avada click!" would be better then this, there were such big chunks missing before :/ Its very annoying... like you missed one chapter.

Legeremancy, dirty bloods....... really, proofread please. It breaks immersion of reading.

Right? Looking at novel picture i thought mask would be his. But its all skipped.

BEETLE.....? I am guessing it was niffler from description. Beetle lol. There are some weird translations in this, like death eaters being called something weird - for a second there, i thought he meant inferi! Gah...

This doesnt even make sense, is this uploaded constantly like quarter of chapter or something? Where is the rest??? And him being 2,2m and canadian and all this in america.... nonsense also. Chinese novels maan.....

Olivander shop is more then 2 millennias old, and garrick says he never thought of some wand combination with such common materials as these? What an absolutely forced chinese praise! Disgusting 🤢🤮

Ridicolous is what they are! What kind of image is this, lol?! Who thought of such dementors oO (this is translation of novel, not original right?)

Ahhh~ Author, next chapter please. Don't make it yet another dropped novel @,@ It's quite good and still far from over..... PS. Continue with story even after noseless death, most novels end there and it sucks :/

Since when can you defend killing curse with protego? Or fling it away with your wand...? Huh???

Yeah its very illogical unless fake/survived.

Since when Dobby speaks "i"??? He always used 3rd person.

I ignore all the "me", "your" and other such errors. But what's with the names? Shouldn't it be nargles and wrackspurts???

Reverse harem? Sort of atleast, weird. Hopefully no harem in new world, harems suck! Or are you not writing this anymore? oO Also she is John Snow? I am vaguely sure it was him born in tower. So... ~

This is impossible to understand. When is he talking, when thinking? What is even going on??? Forget it... dropped......

Did you confuse vanishing with disillusion or something? One erases and other merely makes it invisible like in this chapter oO