Aman_Kumar_7601

the player hides his past

where the hell did this come from

The writing style and the grammar made my head hurt,though the story itself seems good.

Have read 22 chapters till now, I can say that the story is great but the world building definitely needs much work,new things are suddenly introduced without any background which makes it harder to follow the story,like there is no background of human kingdoms or their gods since it was only introduced that other races have gods and then also the MC getting stronger in six months described in 1 chapter very minimally (suddenly even the dragon god appears to help him transition without any prior introduction) leaving a lot to be desired in description , including many more plot holes.