Shorya_Rai

good concept. refine it more and flesh out the future arcs and this will be a great novel.

Revive the Yamazaki clan, their ressurgance will be good for another Arc. Give them a few Op fighters, and a new Head Honcho on the same level as Shingen or Gapryung.

MORE.....MOOORRRREEE !! TAKE THESE POWER STONES AND GIVE ME MORE !!!!

Bro, you got some Peak fiction here. I'm at the edge of my seats for the entire *ducking* chapter. If you want constructive criticism, there isn't any that i can give. Your writing fits perfectly in the theme Jujutsu Kaisen has going on. Good Job man. Keep it up. There aren't many that can write as good as you around. Also, when is the next chapter coming ? Maybe give us an upload schedule .

James Lee

James Lee

New Chapter When ? please release new chapters soon .This is my Favourite Tensura Fic.

I am new to you stories, but i can say with absolutely certainty that your tensura series fanfiction are better than the vast majority of the rest of the fandom. Keep up the good work and may motivation and inspiration bless your mind. Also, as a side note, no need to take this seriously, please update this particular fic. It has swiftly become one of my favourites.

this fic is by far my favourite genshin story. A recommendation from me is try to increase your chapter size.

WE NEED MORE !!! on the flip side this is an excellent story. Hope this doesn't drop dead or gets on Hiatus