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Jeet_1993

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Its nice to meet you all. I am a noob writer but still writing for my passion. Please take care of me :)

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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19932h
    Replied to N_RR

    ok i got that. seems i kind of messed up in explanation . i didn't give it much thought before but will fix it tomorrow. thx for letting me know.

    Arjun felt his heart sink with the troubling news. Just moments ago, he had literally died while saving a girl, and now, in the afterlife, he found himself in a forced situation to fight for unknown reasons.
    Empire Ascension: The Rise of the Fated One
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19932h
    Replied to N_RR

    thanks. :) lack of experience bro.it's my first novel and first chapter. will think about it if I got time. already out of stocks now.

    Ch 2 Echoes of Destiny
    Empire Ascension: The Rise of the Fated One
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_199316h
    Commented

    have u ever heard about if ending felt good then its no less thn happy ending?? next time add pappu instead, atleast i can fantasize the income of free gold from a potato machine.

    Maybe someone called Sam Potato would come up with a statement saying " How come black Africans in South India come up with such an advanced intellectual system"
    Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_199316h
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    bro where is space. my eyes are hurting. :(

    Despite missing the opportunity of a lifetime, Ganapatra Pillai's contributions would be numerous in the future. His invention of the world's first microscope and multiple other optical innovations placed him among the top 10 brightest minds in the world, as mentioned in a 21st-century journal from the future. In this list, his position was alongside prominent scientists like Newton, Giovanni Borelli, Robert Boyle, and some other Indian scientists who managed to secure spots on the list. However for the people of the 21st century in the future, it didn't come as a surprise, as it was expected that many Indian scientists would dominate the list. However, in Vijay's past timeline, the publishing of this journal titled "Ten Brightest Minds of the 17th Century" could cause quite a stir in the academic circles in the nation and could lead to multiple riots.
    Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19933d
    Commented

    so most probably the first prince will attack to prove his worth and we will see some real boom! bam! ah!, in action .btw 7 chapters to go for fmc my dear author.

    Ch 53 CHAPTER 53- The whispers of Golconda.
    Heir of an empire: 1538 India.
    History · GunpowderGundam
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19933d
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    "This is a golden opportunity to claim the kingdom, Your Majesty," an eager voice piped up from the crowd. It was a young courtier, a staunch supporter of the eldest prince, Qutbuddin. "Prince Qutbuddin is well-equipped to handle such a task. A single word from you, and he will conquer Dharanikota swiftly."
    Heir of an empire: 1538 India.
    History · GunpowderGundam
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19933d
    Replied to Bro_lord_

    i never said i bunk classes kid.

    Vijay nodded in satisfaction as he recognized another advantage of this approach: its efficiency in terms of time. Traditional kalaripayattu, taught to soldiers, although comprehensive, is time-intensive. Moreover, subsequent variations built upon traditional Kalari, like what the soldiers were doing, also demand significant training. However, with this foundational method of Kalari, there's potential to popularize it nationally as both a self-defence and health-promoting martial art, similar to Karate in Japan, Jujitsu in Brazil, or even Muay Thai in Thailand.
    Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
    History · Mithun_ReddyGaru
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19934d
    Commented

    scheming bastard

    Jamsheed remained silent, but the Sultan knew the damage was done. Even though his son was quiet, it did not mean the rest of the court followed. Whispers sprung up instantly, with courtiers debating what the sultan would do. Some were charmed by the eloquent prince, who stood up for their religion, while the Sultan did not care.
    Heir of an empire: 1538 India.
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19934d
    Commented

    not clear author, he in favor of secularism or he is scheming this issu for his personal gains?

    Jamsheed was the smartest of his sons, and even if the boy had the cunning of a snake, he loved him all the same. His son has something planned and is trying to use him in his plans. He would play along for now. 
    Heir of an empire: 1538 India.
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19934d
    Commented

    zamindar is muslim there?

    "But Your Majesty," one of the zamindars whined, reiterating the issue, "there's a temple belonging to the kafirs right in the disputed zone. That temple and its lands complicate the division."
    Heir of an empire: 1538 India.
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19934d
    Commented

    horses in court?

    The halls of the Sultan's palace were just as opulent as they were full. The Royal court was in session again, and various matters were being discussed. Zamindars bickered over land disputes, their voices rising in heated arguments. High-profile merchants showcased their wares, a dazzling array of jewels, ornaments, and living goods – war horses, concubines, and slaves.
    Heir of an empire: 1538 India.
    History · GunpowderGundam
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19934d
    Replied to Bro_lord_

    but he is writing for an year, then where were you for the last 9 years?

    Vijay nodded in satisfaction as he recognized another advantage of this approach: its efficiency in terms of time. Traditional kalaripayattu, taught to soldiers, although comprehensive, is time-intensive. Moreover, subsequent variations built upon traditional Kalari, like what the soldiers were doing, also demand significant training. However, with this foundational method of Kalari, there's potential to popularize it nationally as both a self-defence and health-promoting martial art, similar to Karate in Japan, Jujitsu in Brazil, or even Muay Thai in Thailand.
    Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
    History · Mithun_ReddyGaru
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19934d
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    The four men looked at each other, unsure as they had never taken on a task like this before. However, since it was his Majesty's request, they agreed, realizing the potential rewards. "As you wish, your Majesty," they said, unaware of how their efforts would change the future landscape of the Empire and elevate Bharatiya to the same level of combat effectiveness among civilians as the Russian men. The result of their collaboration would come to be known as the Four Fundamental Styles of Himsa Kala, or violent arts.
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19934d
    Commented

    please add mua thai. if possible add a trip to thailand.

    Vijay nodded in satisfaction as he recognized another advantage of this approach: its efficiency in terms of time. Traditional kalaripayattu, taught to soldiers, although comprehensive, is time-intensive. Moreover, subsequent variations built upon traditional Kalari, like what the soldiers were doing, also demand significant training. However, with this foundational method of Kalari, there's potential to popularize it nationally as both a self-defence and health-promoting martial art, similar to Karate in Japan, Jujitsu in Brazil, or even Muay Thai in Thailand.
    Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
    History · Mithun_ReddyGaru
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19934d
    Replied to Bro_lord_

    u r here also. nice

    Vijay nodded in satisfaction as he recognized another advantage of this approach: its efficiency in terms of time. Traditional kalaripayattu, taught to soldiers, although comprehensive, is time-intensive. Moreover, subsequent variations built upon traditional Kalari, like what the soldiers were doing, also demand significant training. However, with this foundational method of Kalari, there's potential to popularize it nationally as both a self-defence and health-promoting martial art, similar to Karate in Japan, Jujitsu in Brazil, or even Muay Thai in Thailand.
    Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
    History · Mithun_ReddyGaru
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19934d
    Commented
    Currently, the martial art I practice, Kuttu Varisai, is an unarmed and Grapple combat method.
    Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19934d
    Commented

    this one i guess

    Vijay was also taken aback, not only by the master's fluid movements but also by the striking resemblance of one particular step to a breakdance sequence it resembled. It was intriguing to imagine that what future dancers would use as a dance move, martial artists of this era were employing kicks and attack manoeuvres.
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19939d
    Replied to Sailfish

    My bad i got the notification but missed the comment..thank you a lot, for your kind patronage. ☺️

    Ch 1 Little Introduction before we start ?
    Empire Ascension: The Rise of the Fated One
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_19939d
    Replied to Tapan_Patni

    I m glad for the feedback but it feels a bit strange to see the review as chapter comment , if u using pc for browsing please click on book name there u will see rating option . thnx for reading anyways.☺️

    Ch 1 Little Introduction before we start ?
    Empire Ascension: The Rise of the Fated One
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  • Jeet_1993
    Jeet_199312d
    Commented

    good after 8 chapter we gotta have our fmc

    Ch 52 CHAPTER 52 - Fragment of the lost past.
    Heir of an empire: 1538 India.
    History · GunpowderGundam
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