I appreciate your approach and your work. The story is incredible, and the pace is fantastic. I can't wait for the next chapters. The fanfic is definitely worth reading, although I have a minor critique about the voice in the protagonist's head in the starting chapters, but it's not as prevalent now.

t's not terrible, but it's not exactly great either. The first thing that struck me was the grammar. It's... well, let's just say it's a bit weird. Like, you're reading along, and suddenly you hit a sentence that makes you go, "Wait, what?" It's not unreadable, but it does take some getting used to. But hey, if you're here for a specific "reason", maybe you'll find something to enjoy. then sure, why not give it a shot? I am giving it 5 stars as it delivers on what it promises

I was totally hooked by the synopsis of this webnovel, and I have to say, it blew me away! The story was even better than I expected. The romance (if you can even call it that) felt genuine throughout, without any awkward or forced moments. Plus, I didn't spot any major grammar or spelling mistakes, which was a big plus. Overall, it's a fantastic read that I highly recommend, especially if you're a degen

I've read the first 31 chapters of this webnovel, and it's been a bit of a mixed experience. The main character has some dumb moments, and there are quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes that caught my attention. However, I find the concept interesting, and the story is unfolding in a way that I enjoy. Overall, I'd give it 3 stars – it has its ups and downs, but there's potential for improvement.