Lema404

it is what it is lol. I thought that it would be main world then hop to new world then back to main, lol. that's on me

This is an awesome story. I came for the Marvel universe and was planning on sticking it out, but the author decided that each world hop would be an arc, which takes away from the original story imo. But what can you do? I didn't mind the world hopping cause I figured they would go back to marvel, but it never happened. The way the author dragged out the fate arc was a bit too much. Then, added another fate arc, and now I have a feeling that marvel will take the back seat for a good bit and will not be the focus for a while, which was the reason for me reading this story.

yeaaaa, no... fuk this I'm out

I am you, you are me, we... are, we

why isn't the tag evil,dark, or villain in the story?

Already dealing with chinese names in an american comic. I'm out.

No worries, it's not a big deal. At least with me, lol.

Don't bother. the author isn't American, so those people are just names for their story regardless of whether the names are correct.

- The writing is pretty good, above average. - The pacing of the story is decent, a little slower than I like. - The mc's attitude is fine, but some of the main female characters feel glossed over and are just cheap cut outs. - Honestly, imo the chapter release is a half a step above slow but has the potential to turn worse or better if it gains or losses a chapter. -The sand box has already been built. The author is just tweaking it to fit his narrative.

While it's easy to add "Country" specific idioms and other chinese nonsense that no one knows about except for people born and raised in china. It's best to leave all that stuff out to keep in line with the story and to stop from breaking immersion.