I've only read the prologue and it's quite decent pace. Can't wait to see more of it.

Thank you for the compliment :)

Hello Author here. I'm writing these review just to say that the story might still did not meet any of your expectation but still. The prologue finished at chapter 10 so the real story start from there. I might have to rewrite some of the chapters sometimes so I hope for those of you are reading can give a positive respons to you all. Also, with the way i'm writing i'll say i'm... not gonna put much metapor like some 'Professional' writer. Instead, I'm writing these story to make you all understand the paced of the story.

I know right?

They just build different

Thank you for your feedback :)

Okay I'll do that

I'll keep that in mind

A noble to be specific

Thx :)

It's good story for the intro. Somehow I have a feeling that you're gonna put the alien invasion in the story.

Thank you for your feedback :)

wow, what a character development

Thank you for the comment. This chapter has at least more than 1000 words. that's what it shows to me. But still, thank you for the honesty.

Thank you :)