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user10282mthPostedShameless 5 star review from the author here, I would like to write a few words on what to expect from this novel. First of all, this is my first novel, and english is my second language. So expect mistakes, both in storytelling and grammar, etc. I, of course, will try to minimize them, but there's so much I can do. That is why I ask all of you, future readers, to give me every kind of feedback imaginable. In the end, this story should be enjoyable to you, the reader, not necessarily to me. That's why I need your opinions to create the best version of this novel possible. Moving on to the story. I will try to make the characters as realistic as possible, limit the cliches and forced plot. HOWEVER, cliches are cliches because THEY WORK. In my opinion, they just have to be implemented right, and they will offer an enjoyable experience. There will be romance, and at this point, I don't know if there will be harem. Stick around and find out, i guess:). Keep in mind that everything in the story happens for a reason. If something feels forced, please let me know, and I will look into it and, if necessary, offer an explanation down the line. Anyways, that's all I wanted to say. Enjoy the novel, and, again, don't forget to leave as much feedback as possible!
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bro is ayanokoji
This paragraph has been deleted. - user10283mthCommented"You idiot, I really love you," the boy revealed, his words filled with sincerity and warmth. He embraced Thalia, who was overwhelmed by the depth of his feelings. Unbeknownst to her, a subtle glint sparked in the boy's eyes as he looked at the girl he cherished, unaware of the dark thoughts hidden within him.
- user10283mthCommented"Thank you, Thalia," I responded, my voice filled with 'sincerity', and I accompanied it with a genuine smile. My intent was unmistakable – I wanted to convey my gratitude for her concern and worry,
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grandpa be like
This paragraph has been deleted. - user10283mthCommented"Alan gives me the suitcase the funds inside will be very helpful for raising the orphanage."
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Mister Gloomy Edgelord💀💀💀💀
A triumphant grin lit up Maya's face. "I knew you'd give in, Mister Gloomy Edge lord! Enjoy!" - user10283mthCommented
blud DOES NOT want to talk in this novel💀💀💀💀💀
"Don't talk to me again." With those words, I left the dumbfounded Ethan, making my way toward my room. - user10283mthCommented
when i see red it's over
"Man…. My switch is getting flipped…." At that moment, I could no longer contain the crimson thoughts overlapping inside me…. After all, I didn't need to since they had already set the stage for me. - user10283mthReplied to SnailsRKindaCool69
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To explain my looks, the body of Astron Natusalune possessed an otherworldly beauty, with pale silver skin shimmering softly like moonlight. His hair, as black as the night sky, fell in long, covering his face with an emo look. That was the style he had made for himself, though I wouldn't prefer it, for now, this shape of long-duration hair was very hard to change.